fic - Flutter, A Sort of Fairytale, aka Here Be No Dragons

[brandywine421]

fandom: the oc
title: Flutter, A Sort of Fairytale, aka Here Be No Dragons
rating: PG
disclaimer: I don't own anything OC related
author's note: Heh. Um. Yeah. :)

part one

Comments

[zbyszko]

This was fun.

[yellowvalley]

Utterly, utterly brilliant. You give the best crack, you really do. :D

[overnighter]

Dude, that is an actualfax happy ending! Totally happy! From you!

I love the way you ended this, from the magical bath beads to evil Julie to the wings the color of Ryan's eyes.

So, so awesome.

I'm so glad that you posted this.

[60schic]

*claps hands* Oh Brandy...what a wonderful fairy tale! What I love best about this is how you lapse in and out of canon, and between Olde English and canon-speak. You are a gifted storyteller. BTW, this would make a lovely childrens book!

And now, my random thoughts:

He couldn't control the flutter of his wings.... I bet Ryan gives great wing.

Gold is not as pleasing to me as fruit...prolly why he likes Seth, huh?

Tsk, tsk---again, Seth didn't have Ryan's back...and now I have visions of ben wa balls in my head!

"You give amulets of protection to Sandy and the Princess, yet you do not wear one for yourself. You act as if their life is more precious than yours. You must wear one for yourself. You deserve protection equal to that you give to others," Alex said, soothing the stinging wings.....Yes, so very much like canon Ryan (and agian she's touching his 'wings'!)

Even if Trey insisted on living an evil life, Ryan could at least make sure he didn't enjoy it as much. His brother would never be able to please a lady with

[ryannotseth]

Loved it. I wonder what kind of children Ryan and Alex would have. :) Thanks for the great posts today.