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[brandywine421]

Sorry for the spammage.  I'm on a writing binge.

Why has no one told me that I hadn't updated this in so long?  Oh well.  Here's chapter 4 of Spin.  Click the Spin tag in the upper left for previous chapters.

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[brightsidedc]

Ok, I have to say this made me laugh uncontrollably:

“Whatever. I’m making corn dogs for dinner,” Ryan said as Summer parked outside his apartment.

“Ooh, ghetto gourmet, I can’t wait,” Summer teased.

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I feel sorry for both Kirsten and Ryan in this chapter. I think the tough love that her father has given her over the years has somewhat dissolved into her, thinking that spending/blowing money to solve the problem could work, rather than speaking to Ryan one on one. I hate to say that I forgot all about this fic, but I did. But I was also pleasantly suprised as the memories flooded back to me after seeing the first few lines of the chapter. Good to see that you're continuing it.

[brandywine421]

Hee! I love corn dogs, but as I wrote it, I just knew that Summer isn't the type to grub down on a corn dog. Heh.

I'm glad you see the Caleb parallel.

I forgot about this fic, too. Glad you're still enjoying.

[cheekymice]

Kiki...Kiki...WTF are you doing. You're trying to do the right thing but you are just so bad at it!

Question:As a Brit what is a corn dog?? Hee. I know I could google but I'm lazy.

Good chappy Honey.

I don't know how you are going to fix this one.

[ctoan]

It's a hotdog surrounded by cornbread. On a stick.

[brandywine421]

Hee. Thanks, ctoan. Great pic.

[cheekymice]

*gulp*....yummy...errr I think that rivals deep fried mars bars!

[katwoman76]

"Sorry for the spammage. I'm on a writing binge. "
Are you kidding? Spamming? If you say, you are on a writing binge, everyone of us is probably throwing a party.
So, don't ever apologise again for giving us the drugs, we all craving. Just write more. ;)

Oh,oh, Kirsten is really Calebs daughter. Dammit, she is really doing everything to drive Ryan even further away.
I don't know how, but please Brandy...fix this!!! *begging*

[brandywine421]

Thanks, katwoman. 3 fics last night, wooh, like I really don't have a life :) 'Cause I don't.

I'm going to try to fix this. Not sure how yet, but I shall try.

[katwoman76]

"Your wish is my account"
LOL. *biggrin*

"like I really don't have a life :) 'Cause I don't."
Guess, that depends on how you define 'having a life'. ;)
*hug*

"3 fics last night"
Just think about how happy you make your addicted readers, whenever you update a WIP (doesn't matter, which one ...I'm always right back in the story, whenever one of them gets a new chapter) or start a new one.

"I'm going to try to fix this. Not sure how yet, but I shall try."
*happy dance* I'm confident, you will find a way. *admire*

[ctoan]

Poor misguided Kiki. *shakes head* She seems so hard headed and unwilling to listen to reason. “Why don’t you try talking to him? He seems to be a good kid, a smart kid.”

Kirsten frowned. “Double the worth of your shop.”

I liked Summer and Ryan telling Seth to be nice to his mom. Neither of them have one and couldn't imagine turning their backs if they did.

Looking forward to seeing how you fix this.

[brandywine421]

Kiki's definitely batting zero in this one.

Thanks for commenting! Glad you liked it!

[sineresi]

Oh Kirsten, no! This is so not the way to get Ryan back. *sigh* But I do love the angst, so all is well.

I'm so glad you continued this story, I had forgotten all about it and had to go back and read the previous chapters. What a hardship! ;o)

[brandywine421]

Thanks for rereading! I'm glad you liked the angst!

Poor Ryan, and poor Kiki. There is lots of mending needed around here.