Disappointment

Sep 13, 2008 15:27

    It starts in my heart, I believe, and travels through my blood until it reaches my mind. Sliding fluidly with a ferocity only captured by the adrenaline an emotion, hate, can hold. Fangs barred it squirms through the capillaries towards my memories, of a better time. When I could stay up all night with her and play chess, or call her on the ( Read more... )

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gatasalbaje September 13 2008, 20:08:30 UTC
Truly creative, very poetic.

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gatasalbaje September 13 2008, 20:09:36 UTC
And I hope youre ok.

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brandonboggs September 13 2008, 23:07:01 UTC
I'm fine. Just had a bad time this afternoon. My friend called and told me she's into alcohol/drugs and is 'adjusting' to her high school a little too much. I was kind of pissed, so I wrote! :D

But I'm better now.
Thanks for reading it. And thanks for liking it!

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annelaure September 13 2008, 20:34:58 UTC
Even when you consider all the "bad" feelings behind this writing, it's really beautiful to read.
I'm impressed.

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brandonboggs September 13 2008, 23:06:01 UTC
Thanks so much! Yeah, I had kind of an emo hour today... My friend called and informed me she's into alcohol/drugs and has three boyfriends... D:<

But then I watched a season of the Office and I feel hella better now. <3

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krasivyi_meg September 13 2008, 22:56:34 UTC
Beautiful writing. I love it ♥
But I'm sorry you feel this way. I hate seeing you like this :[
Hope you feel better soon. xx

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brandonboggs September 13 2008, 23:04:32 UTC
I like to write sometimes. Haha. <3
It's okay, I'm fine. I just still have this terrible cold.

But the writing is about how my best friend moved away last summer and now she lives in Alaska and gets into drugs, has three boyfriends, and barely ever calls me. D:<

Thanks so much for the support. :3

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shy_ba_sly September 14 2008, 06:23:43 UTC
marvellous writing! :)

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brandonboggs September 14 2008, 16:27:24 UTC
Thanks so much. :]
I love your icon. That Edward guy is hot.

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shy_ba_sly September 14 2008, 23:39:45 UTC
indeed he is! =D

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brandonboggs September 14 2008, 23:42:09 UTC
inorite?!
Can't wait for the next Stephanie Meyer book, in his point of view~

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