winter is when, x-posted to teasparrows

[branchlimbs]

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[corposant]

You've captured winter perfectly.

[branchlimbs]

this is exactly what i wanted to hear from exactly the right person. thank you so, so much.

[abirdflutters]

you know winter so well. xx

(first two lines. perfect)

[fucknscandalous]

that photo is haunting

[tangled_kisses]

that photo is amazing. xx

& besides the comma after "forgets" (I think it interrupts the flow),
this poem is beautiful. ♥

[branchlimbs]

i was trying to express the choppy, stuck nature of winter.

[leftoff]

keep it close