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brainofck

like water, lying (The Event Horizon Remix)

Jul 03, 2007 06:18

*rushes in, flailing papers*

Sorry! Sorry! I totally confused the deadline for this, and here I am, two days late. So, so sorry, synecdochic.

But here it is. My brazen attempt to crack the Eurydiceverse.

Title: like water, lying (The Event Horizon Remix)
Author: muck-a-luck, posting in brainofck
Pairing: Daniel Jackson/Jack O'Neill, Daniel Jackson/Cameron Mitchell, ( Read more... )

stargate, remix, ficathon, stand alones

Comments 28

arby_m July 3 2007, 22:53:36 UTC

Wow. There are no words. I just read the original (for the first time, haven't the slightest idea how I missed it before) and then this and my mind is totally fucking blown. WOW.

I did happen to notice a few teeeeny things that you might want to fix, just because this is way too good for any little flaws to slow it down.

Daniel had never tried to reassure me before. (insert "to" between "tried" and "reassure")

There's also the collar. It's strange and alien and I suspect it's its meaning ("its" instead of "it's")

But it's not like I wouldn't have been here, doing this anyway, Mitchell or no Mitchell, my dick tells my brain, so I dig my fingers into that touchable ass and let myself ride Daniel's wave.

(I think the bold part should be italicized too, because it's part of what Jack's dick is telling his brain. (ha!))

brainofck July 4 2007, 02:21:51 UTC

Thank you so much! You should definitely check her site. I had missed whole chunks of the series.

Thanks for the edits. I was a little rushed getting it posted. I considered naming it the "OMG! I Mixed Up The Due Date" Remix, but that seemed very clunky.

unholyglee July 4 2007, 01:41:47 UTC

Holy hoppin' fuck. You made Jack all but jump off the screen.

brainofck July 4 2007, 02:22:16 UTC

kazbaby July 4 2007, 10:30:51 UTC

I happily have no words for this. Just...

*saves forever and goes back to read again*

saturn92103 July 4 2007, 14:25:36 UTC

Oh, wow. I love "Like Water, Lying" and this remix was the perfect complement to the original story.

filenotch July 4 2007, 17:56:17 UTC

I like this Jack, and I like that he doesn't continue the sardonic/sarcastic commentary inside his head, but you can still hear where that part of his armor comes from. This is an excellent remix.