1+1+1+1

[brainofck]

Title: 1+1+1+1
Author: muck-a-luck, posting in brainofck
Pairing: Teal'c/Daniel Jackson/Jack O'Neill/Samantha Carter
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jack can't take it any more
Content/warnings: Well, het content, obviously.
Spoilers: Season 4.
Words: 10,634
Disclaimer: If anybody is planning a script like this for SG-1, I'm certainly not going to claim any rights to it

Comments

[brainofck]

Wow! Thank you! :) This was fun to write, though it was driving me crazy, because I wanted Jack to be mostly angry and cranky and irritable the whole time, because on the show he really is, though I often forget that til I watch it again. And it was really hard, because I am Miss Pollyanna and I want everybody else to be, too! :)

Then thing about come/cum. I go back and forth on that. I don't like it either way, and usually go for the alternate spelling so that it will be it's own word, and not become a homonym wiht a perfectly useful and not-at-all dirty verb, come. Every time I write it, though, I wince. It's a stupid verb. But you can't very well write ejaculate every time, can you? *scowls*

[sidlj]

*thinks deep thoughts* If I had been Jack, I would have started to think Daniel didn't want me, since he seemed comfortable enough with Sam and Teal'c. I would have started to think that I had been wrong, that it wasn't that Daniel hadn't recognized the UST between us, but that I had projected my own feelings on to him.

But, I'm not Jack. :-) Who never once thinks that, and who never stops trying to persuade Daniel to get with the program, for cryin' out loud!

Puppy pile!

[brainofck]

I would have started to think Daniel didn't want me

Eep. This is a moment of the writer not taking a step back. Well, I'm chalking it up to Jack's gigantic ego. Plus the fact that Sam made the whole thing a package deal, so he had incentive to haul Daniel back into bed.

Yay, puppies! Naughty, frisky puppies! :D

[sidlj]

Oh, hey, I wasn't questioning. I mean, I am a sensitive flower, and Jack is...well...Jack!

:-D

Yes, tons of incentive quite apart from Daniel being totally hot and lickable and stuff.

[green_grrl]

Damn you! You made me read OT4. Again. And it's good!

I love that it isn't easy. I love the way the missions are woven into the background of the story -- especially, especially how Absolute Power impacted Daniel. I love the way that they are learning and having to work their way through the intense closeness of their team and horniness and comfort, and the difference between different kinds of love and being "in love" -- and how all those factors require balancing.

[brainofck]

Ack! You didn't have to read it again! :)

I love the way the missions are woven into the background of the story

If you're willing to work within canon, SG-1 means never having to write mission fic...

the difference between different kinds of loveResulting in part from the fact that my brain refuses to write a romantic relationship between anybody but Jack and Daniel. I found that part of writing this *so* incredibly annoying

[green_grrl]

Um, well first of all, I did have to read it again -- for the ending! Also, I've read all your OT4 crack!smuts. Shh... don't tell! ;-)

If you're willing to work within canon, SG-1 means never having to write mission fic...

Ooo, good point! *eyes unfinished mission fics darkly*

*singsongs* Jack and Daniel are OTP, OTP, OTP! Hee!

And, pffft, sex scenes. Didn't really notice a glaring lack. Because, story! Mmmm, mpreg conception... Toss it to me if you like. ;-)

Oh those aliens. Gods bless them for making the team do it!

[melayneseahawk]

I'm not usually a fan of OT4, but this worked for me. Great!

[crayonbreakygal]

Thinky!Daniel almost ruined it all! I think that fit so well in your fic. Doing an OT3 is hard enough (no pun intended), but OT4! You pulled it off. I just loved Jack's explanation of why everyone wanted everyone. Fit perfectly. And yes, Jack would be the first one Teal'c would be with. So true. Thanks for sharing.