Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 10

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Title: Kings and Beggars of the World

Rating: NC-17

Author: braincloud2

Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5

Warnings: Unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.

Disclaimer: Don’t own, this is fiction.

Word Count: 50,000+

Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes up one morning to find himself at the first day of

Comments

[annon_of_rhi]

Holy fuuuuuuuuuuuuck *__*

You know, I was just thinking this week that this hadn't updated in a little bit and I was starting to get a little worried. But oh my gosh, this was worth the wait! So much happened! Their performances, the crazy fans, Simon suspecting something, how out of control it feels like everything is getting. Not to mention all the delicious OT5 parts, oh my gosh they're my favourite. Harry and Niall on the couch filled my chest with butterflies, Liam and Zayn yes please, Louis biting Liam and how okay with that Harry was HECK YES, Harry and Louis going all the way (~yeah all the way), Harry and Zayn again with the finger licking. Just. God, it's like, I don't want there to be as big a wait as last time, but I can't really complain when so much awesome came out of it. :D :D :D

[braincloud2]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad all of that came across, wow~ I'll try to be quicker on the next one just for you, because your comment fills me with butterflies XD

[paulina_peyton]

aaaaaa new part, new part. new part!! *_*
it's brilliant. funny, hot, amazing, perfect!!
i just love this story so much, so freakign much!! :D

[braincloud2]

Thank you, wow! That's really nice of you to say :D x

[naughticals]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i'm so so so thrilled you're continuing with this!
i'm adoring it, and can't wait to see where it goes :))))

[braincloud2]

Thank you mate! Seriously, you've got me squirming with joy (if that's not too weird) I'm thrilled you're continuing to read it :D

[exposedwords]

Just yesterday I was thinking about how this story hasn't updated in a while, and then...god bless.

Uhg this is perfect, the smut was so so hot, and oh god Zayn watching and then Harry sucking his fingers and then Louis fucking him again jesus.

And everything else, the bit with Niall wanting to be closer (which made me sad because rn he's the only one not getting any poor boy) and Simon being all suspicious and all those people who used to be the boys' friends now being jealous of them it's sad. This is still so good uhg seriously, thank you for updating and I'll be eagerly awaiting more!

[braincloud2]

My goodness, thank you so much, I'm so glad you thought so! XD
I'm thrilled that all of that came across, my Niall feels are crying out for attention, and I can't wait to do more now things are getting complicated. Thanks again mate, it means a lot! :)

[nature_aly]

I'm so glad to see not only one, but two chapters of this updated. This is such a great fic! I love how the OT5 is being worked in, they're all just so on top of each other and close, how could they not all be in love?

And so much stuff happened, I don't even really know what to mention in this comment. I really like that Simon is savvy enough to know that the boys can't be this good without knowing each other longer than he thinks. Because it's true, but I was basically shouting at my computer that 'Harry's not lying though!' because I'm a dork.

I am a little upset that no one has kissed Niall yet, or maybe its happened but Harry just doesn't know about it. C'mon, Niall needs kisses.

[braincloud2]

Wow, thank you so much! Seriously dying from how warm and fuzzy you make me feel~
Everything's getting more complicated now, and Harry's emotions are getting twisted around so much I almost feel mean to be doing it to the poor boy. And Niall, poor boy, he's practically crying out to be loved.
Thank you for commenting, I can't wait to continue this~ xx