Kings and Beggars of the World - Part 7
Title: Kings and Beggars of the World
Rating: NC-17
Author: braincloud2
Parings: Harry/Louis, ot5
Warnings: Sexual content, unexplained time-travel, and some offensive language.
Disclaimer: I don’t own people. I don’t intend offense. This is fiction.
Word Count: 40,000+ (!!!)
Summary: Harry’s on tour and he feels on top of the world-that is-until he wakes ( Read more... )
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Okay, so from the top. I love the fact that they’d put on more muscle than last time when they were hanging at Harry’s stepdad’s bungalow and when Harry managed to get the upper hand on Louis there…yes, so very much yes!
And throughout the entirety of Forever Young I was grinning like an absolute fool xd I realized halfway through that I couldn’t actually hear them singing so I shouldn’t be swaying along in my seat, but…you just write it so excitingly, it’s like I’m there watching them perform, and it’s so impressive because writing about people singing is always so hard!
‘Hesitation’. I died xD that was too funny!
Like Harry, I am in no condition to manage more than ‘uh’ after that either.
Oh Louis, you shy little cupcake you, can’t you see he wants you, too?
This is so brilliant I can’t even breathe, and I’m staying up way too late reading this considering I have to be up before sunrise tomorrow morning. No regrets though, this is so worth it ^^
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Thank you because I always want to make it more active rather than just pasting the lyrics down the page, so I'm glad it actually works instead of being awkward.
And Louis getting surprised when Harry suddenly dominates him is one of my favourite tropes haha~
I have forever love for you <3
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