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Fic: Colors (1/1)

Sep 19, 2007 20:53

Title: Colors (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters:Dick/Roy, Lian, Alfred, Clark/Bruce
Categories: Fluff, Slice-Of-Life
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Roy’s birthday is a happy time for his little family.
Date Of Completion: September 18, 2007
Date Of Posting: September 19, 2007
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s ( Read more... )

dick grayson/roy harper, lian harper, clark kent/bruce wayne, nightwing/red arrow, colors, birthday fic, superman/batman, alfred pennyworth

Comments 22

wachey September 20 2007, 10:04:11 UTC

Aww, Lian is just so adorable!! And Dick was so sweet!! This fic was just like eating that pink cherry cake you described!

bradygirl_12 September 20 2007, 16:43:07 UTC

Aww, Lian is just so adorable!! And Dick was so sweet!! This fic was just like eating that pink cherry cake you described!

*grins* Thanks, Wachey! Sometimes after you've written a dramatic fic you need the light 'n' fluffy! :)

tmelange September 20 2007, 10:30:03 UTC

bradygirl_12 September 20 2007, 16:46:10 UTC

Very nice! I particularly liked the perspective of seeing Bruce and Clark's relationship through a third person's pov. You craft a very memorable internal voice for Dick. The little girl was cute too.

Bravo.

Thank you, Theresa! :)

I always enjoy a third person's POV of a favorite relationship. There can be valuable insights delivered to the reader that way. And I'm glad you found Dick's internal voice memorable! :)

Lian is wonderfully easy to write. :)

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bradygirl_12 September 20 2007, 17:02:09 UTC

*hugs this fic* It is so sunny and happy!

I'm glad you enjoyed the present, m'dear! :)

I love Dick and Roy together, and the Clark and Bruce undertones was a treat.

Whenever I think of Dick and Roy together, I also think of Clark and Bruce happy together. I like the two couples forming a very happy family along with Alfred and Lian. :)

And a happy Lian makes a happy fic.

She's easy to write, the dear. :)

Yay for pink icing!

I change the kind of birthday cake I have each year, but more often than not, it turns out to be pink with pink icing! :)

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bradygirl_12 September 20 2007, 18:30:28 UTC

Great job. Great handle on Lian, the little princess that she is. Look forward to seeing you write more and more.

Thanks, Merfilly! :)

I really love Lian. :)

I love writing, so 'til the Muses desert me, you've got me! :)

starsandsea September 20 2007, 19:00:58 UTC

Awwwww!! This was so lovely! :D

Robbie could wear all the dark Nightwing costumes he wanted, but at heart he was still a circus brat who loved bright colors.

LOL!!

While he and Roy were getting better at cooking (in fact, their next lesson was here this weekend), nothing matched Alfred’s cooking skills.

*giggles*

Clark was there, wonderful, smiling, generous Clark, who loved Bruce with all his considerable heart.

*melts*

No more silly Daddy and Papa. They were together, they would stay together, and she would be their Princess, ‘nuff said!

Awwww!! So sweet! :D

Wonderful!

bradygirl_12 September 20 2007, 22:29:07 UTC

Awwwww!! This was so lovely! :D

Thank you, m'dear! :)

Robbie could wear all the dark Nightwing costumes he wanted, but at heart he was still a circus brat who loved bright colors.

LOL!!

Absolutely! Dick can try, but he's a bright boy at heart. ;)

While he and Roy were getting better at cooking (in fact, their next lesson was here this weekend), nothing matched Alfred’s cooking skills.

*giggles*

Lian can't be eating take-out all the time, right? :)

Clark was there, wonderful, smiling, generous Clark, who loved Bruce with all his considerable heart.

*melts*

Bruce is a lucky man! :)

No more silly Daddy and Papa. They were together, they would stay together, and she would be their Princess, 'nuff said!

Awwww!! So sweet! :D

Wonderful!

It was lots of fun to write! :)