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Fic: The Stolen Heart (1/1)

Jun 21, 2011 13:29

Title: The Stolen Heart (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Clark/Lex, Lionel Luthor, Tess Mercer, Lana Lang (cameo), Jonathan/Martha
Continuity: Smallville
Genres: Challenge, Fairytale, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Claim: For my 2011 clexmas Spring/Summer/Autumn Fling Bingo Card.
Prompt: Fairytales/FolklorePattern: Basic Bingo (Floating/A ( Read more... )

clex, tess mercer, superman/lex luthor, clexmas, the stolen heart, lana lang, clark kent/lex luthor, bingo card, jonathan kent/martha kent, challenge

Comments 14

originalceenote June 22 2011, 17:55:39 UTC

I wish there was more! This was so cute!

bradygirl_12 June 22 2011, 22:52:59 UTC

I wish there was more! This was so cute!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

BTW, I LOVE your icon! Yeah, Archie/Reggie! ;)

ilovetobefree June 22 2011, 19:25:54 UTC

The Prince was not cruel but neither was he compassionate.
I understand the “non compassionate” part very well. Anyway, I’m glad you didn’t write him as a cruel person.

Sir Tess (knighted for her exceptional skill) was the finest Knight in all the land.
WOW, nice to see Tess in this story (exceptional skill - yes! :)).

The beautiful young tavernkeeper in town said, “Seek and ye shall find there.”
YAY, it’s Lana, isn’t it. :)

“Julian,” the Prince said. He wished to remain incognito.
Julian - I liked this choice of name. :)

The Prince’s eyebrows rose. “You…are from the heavens?”
“I am not sure.” For a moment, his serenity seemed to waver, then he smiled again. “Study me so that I may learn.”
Clark trusted the Prince so much. I’m glad Lex didn’t let him down.

“What is happening to me?” The Prince rested a hand on his chest.
Clark smiled. “You are whole again, Prince Alexander.”
“You…you know who I am?”
“Of course, Your Majesty. We are simple country folk, not stupid.”Clark knew. And he helped Alexander to get his heart back - great ( ... )

bradygirl_12 June 22 2011, 22:58:29 UTC

The Prince was not cruel but neither was he compassionate.
I understand the “non compassionate” part very well. Anyway, I’m glad you didn’t write him as a cruel person.

Yeah, he just simply didn't feel.

Sir Tess (knighted for her exceptional skill) was the finest Knight in all the land.
WOW, nice to see Tess in this story (exceptional skill - yes! :)).

I love Tess! She's a fantastic character. :)

The beautiful young tavernkeeper in town said, “Seek and ye shall find there.”
YAY, it’s Lana, isn’t it. :)

Bingo! :)

“Julian,” the Prince said. He wished to remain incognito.
Julian - I liked this choice of name. :)

I thought it fitting. :)

The Prince’s eyebrows rose. “You…are from the heavens?”
“I am not sure.” For a moment, his serenity seemed to waver, then he smiled again. “Study me so that I may learn.”
Clark trusted the Prince so much. I’m glad Lex didn’t let him down.

Clark DID trust Lex a lot. So did Martha and Jonathan, and in the way of fairytales, they knew that he could be trusted.

“What is happening to me?” The Prince ( ... )