The Knight patted his horse’s neck. “What manner of man is this, Midnight?” He urged his steed forward. “I must investigate further.” I liked the last sentence. :)
but the dark-blue steel suited him "Dark-blue steel" - YES! I’m sure he looked wonderful in it! :)
Up close, he was most certainly young, around his own age, he guessed, with incredible blue eyes and lips lush and ripe. WOW, the eyes and the lips - I love the image.
Once they reached the cottage he helped his guest out of his armor, Lancelot slipping on a black tunic, knotting it at the waist as he put on soft deerskin boots. His legs were clad in black tights, and he ran a tortoiseshell comb through his raven hair.
Arthur’s cream-colored tunic and brown pants were worn but clean, his sturdy boots in good condition. The description captured perfectly the difference between their origin.
“Come in, Sir Lancelot. My wife is the best cook in all of Britain.” True! :)
“Mayhaps, but I know that the true King of England will someday come forward to meet his Destiny.”Great
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The Knight patted his horse’s neck. “What manner of man is this, Midnight?” He urged his steed forward. “I must investigate further.” I liked the last sentence. :)
Always the Detective! :)
but the dark-blue steel suited him "Dark-blue steel" - YES! I’m sure he looked wonderful in it! :)
He looks AWESOME in it! :)
Up close, he was most certainly young, around his own age, he guessed, with incredible blue eyes and lips lush and ripe. WOW, the eyes and the lips - I love the image.
So do I! ;)
Once they reached the cottage he helped his guest out of his armor, Lancelot slipping on a black tunic, knotting it at the waist as he put on soft deerskin boots. His legs were clad in black tights, and he ran a tortoiseshell comb through his raven hair.
Arthur’s cream-colored tunic and brown pants were worn but clean, his sturdy boots in good condition. The description captured perfectly the difference between their origin.
Yes, a good contrast! :)
“Come in, Sir Lancelot. My wife is the best cook in all of Britain.” True! :)No matter what
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What an awesome start! You know I love your Clark/Bruce fics and this is no exception. You always have such unique ideas and I love how Jonathan and Martha are there too. :D
What an awesome start! You know I love your Clark/Bruce fics and this is no exception. You always have such unique ideas and I love how Jonathan and Martha are there too. :D
Can't wait to read more! :)
Thank you, hon! :)
Well, it took me awhile to get this one rolling, but I'm pretty satisfied with the outcome. :)
I loved this! The only little thing that threw me was the description of Arthur's hair as red-gold. I know that's right for traditional Arthur, but all wrong for the last Kryptonian. Everything else just felt so right - Martha and Jonathan make a wonderful choice to raise the Once and Future King.
loved this! The only little thing that threw me was the description of Arthur's hair as red-gold. I know that's right for traditional Arthur, but all wrong for the last Kryptonian.
Yeah, I debated the hair color, but then decided that in this AU, Clark wouldn't mind a change. :)
Everything else just felt so right - Martha and Jonathan make a wonderful choice to raise the Once and Future King.
They raised the World's Greatest Superhero. Guess they can raise the Once and Future King, too. ;)
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I am curious as to how you worked our heros into this world. So far it's great!
I'm looking forward to the next parts.
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Always! :)
I am curious as to how you worked our heros into this world. So far it's great!
I toyed with the idea of not making them Arthur and Lancelot, but it was too much fun to do it the other way! :)
I'm looking forward to the next parts.
Glad you like this, C.! :)
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I liked the last sentence. :)
but the dark-blue steel suited him
"Dark-blue steel" - YES! I’m sure he looked wonderful in it! :)
Up close, he was most certainly young, around his own age, he guessed, with incredible blue eyes and lips lush and ripe.
WOW, the eyes and the lips - I love the image.
Once they reached the cottage he helped his guest out of his armor, Lancelot slipping on a black tunic, knotting it at the waist as he put on soft deerskin boots. His legs were clad in black tights, and he ran a tortoiseshell comb through his raven hair.
Arthur’s cream-colored tunic and brown pants were worn but clean, his sturdy boots in good condition.
The description captured perfectly the difference between their origin.
“Come in, Sir Lancelot. My wife is the best cook in all of Britain.”
True! :)
“Mayhaps, but I know that the true King of England will someday come forward to meet his Destiny.”Great ( ... )
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I liked the last sentence. :)
Always the Detective! :)
but the dark-blue steel suited him
"Dark-blue steel" - YES! I’m sure he looked wonderful in it! :)
He looks AWESOME in it! :)
Up close, he was most certainly young, around his own age, he guessed, with incredible blue eyes and lips lush and ripe.
WOW, the eyes and the lips - I love the image.
So do I! ;)
Once they reached the cottage he helped his guest out of his armor, Lancelot slipping on a black tunic, knotting it at the waist as he put on soft deerskin boots. His legs were clad in black tights, and he ran a tortoiseshell comb through his raven hair.
Arthur’s cream-colored tunic and brown pants were worn but clean, his sturdy boots in good condition.
The description captured perfectly the difference between their origin.
Yes, a good contrast! :)
“Come in, Sir Lancelot. My wife is the best cook in all of Britain.”
True! :)No matter what ( ... )
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Can't wait to read more! :)
Wonderful job! :D
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Can't wait to read more! :)
Thank you, hon! :)
Well, it took me awhile to get this one rolling, but I'm pretty satisfied with the outcome. :)
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Yeah, I debated the hair color, but then decided that in this AU, Clark wouldn't mind a change. :)
Everything else just felt so right - Martha and Jonathan make a wonderful choice to raise the Once and Future King.
They raised the World's Greatest Superhero. Guess they can raise the Once and Future King, too. ;)
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*grins*
Quite so! :)
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