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Fic: Blood On The Snow (1/6)

Nov 14, 2009 20:27

Title: Blood On The Snow (1/6)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Mel/Johnny
Fandom: Public EnemiesGenres: AU, Fairytale, Romance ( Read more... )

blood on the snow, public enemies, melvin purvis/johnny dillinger

Comments 4

siriusfanatic November 15 2009, 05:39:42 UTC

Aw that was lovely. It feels like some sort of odd dream in which John and Mel are in a play. Very romantic language.

bradygirl_12 November 15 2009, 05:42:31 UTC

Aw that was lovely. It feels like some sort of odd dream in which John and Mel are in a play. Very romantic language.

Thank you, Sirius! :)

I love the language rhythm and style of fairytales. I think you'll enjoy the remaining chapters as this was just a little appetizer at the feast. :)

Tales of evil Grand Dukes and shining Knights, oh, yes! :)

brushed_velvet November 15 2009, 13:39:37 UTC

Mmmmm, this is delicious! It's still recognisably Johnnie and Mel but the language gives it an ethereal quality. And the use of the term 'dark knight' reminds me of another very irresistible keeper of the law. :D

bradygirl_12 November 15 2009, 19:10:15 UTC

Mmmmm, this is delicious! It's still recognisably Johnnie and Mel but the language gives it an ethereal quality.

Thank you! I was hoping that the language would work. :)

And the use of the term 'dark knight' reminds me of another very irresistible keeper of the law. :D

Of course! ;)