Title: European (Riviera) Triptych III: Summer Night On The Riviera (Triptych Series I) (1/1) Author: BradyGirl_12 Pairings/Characters: Mel/Johnny/Billie Fandom: Public EnemiesGenres: AU, PWP
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Hmm. That was hot. I love the way you wrote one scene from their three, individual perspectives. And I love that you also included their own personal thoughts on the complicated relationship. But mostly I just loved the hot, passionate sex. ;)
Hmm. That was hot. I love the way you wrote one scene from their three, individual perspectives. And I love that you also included their own personal thoughts on the complicated relationship.
I love the idea of getting into the Trio's heads and finding out what makes them tick. :)
But mostly I just loved the hot, passionate sex. ;)
Oh la-la! I like the three different perspectives in this one and the different emotions involved in each. (le sigh!) So romantic!
Working on a three-way as well with our beloved trio at the moment, but it's...well...much dirtier and revolves around Billie coaxing Mel into getting a little payback from the far too arrogant Mr. Dillinger. (waggles eyebrows)
Oh la-la! I like the three different perspectives in this one and the different emotions involved in each. (le sigh!) So romantic!
*grins*
I was in a romantic mood when I wrote this. :)
Working on a three-way as well with our beloved trio at the moment, but it's...well...much dirtier and revolves around Billie coaxing Mel into getting a little payback from the far too arrogant Mr. Dillinger. (waggles eyebrows)
LOL! I like the sound of that: dirty, and paying back an arrogant Johnny. Sounds like fun! :)
I loved how you took a moment and showed it three different ways. And what a moment! You steamed up my glasses! Lovely job - I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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Great job!
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I love the idea of getting into the Trio's heads and finding out what makes them tick. :)
But mostly I just loved the hot, passionate sex. ;)
Great job!
LOL!
Hot, passionate sex for the win! ;)
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I like the three different perspectives in this one and the different emotions involved in each. (le sigh!) So romantic!
Working on a three-way as well with our beloved trio at the moment, but it's...well...much dirtier and revolves around Billie coaxing Mel into getting a little payback from the far too arrogant Mr. Dillinger. (waggles eyebrows)
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I like the three different perspectives in this one and the different emotions involved in each. (le sigh!) So romantic!
*grins*
I was in a romantic mood when I wrote this. :)
Working on a three-way as well with our beloved trio at the moment, but it's...well...much dirtier and revolves around Billie coaxing Mel into getting a little payback from the far too arrogant Mr. Dillinger. (waggles eyebrows)
LOL! I like the sound of that: dirty, and paying back an arrogant Johnny. Sounds like fun! :)
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LOL! Steamy is good. ;)
Lovely job - I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Definitely going to explore how they cope with changing events in Europe, and also probably write some prequels when they were still in the States.
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This is hot and sweet. My favourite aspect is Billie loving the boys equally, awww! :)
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They're just made for Europe, aren't they? :)
This is hot and sweet. My favourite aspect is Billie loving the boys equally, awww! :)
I think she'd really fall for Mel, too, the sweetie. :)
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Glad you enjoyed this, Crimson! :)
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