Fic: Mel’s Secret (1/1)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: Mel’s Secret (1/1

Comments

[waitingtobelit]

Nice! I liked that you wrote this scene from the perspective of a third party. It definitely adds to the tension. Aw, Carter is so practical and sweet. It's nice that he looks out for Mel like he does. Great job, here! I enjoyed this. :)

[bradygirl_12]

Nice! I liked that you wrote this scene from the perspective of a third party. It definitely adds to the tension.

Third party perspectives always offer fresh insights, don't they? :)

Aw, Carter is so practical and sweet. It's nice that he looks out for Mel like he does. Great job, here! I enjoyed this. :)

Thank you, m'dear! Carter is sweet and loyal and Mel's lucky to have him as a friend. :)

[crimsonquills]

Wheee! This was awesome. <3 Carter makes an excellent third person perspective, which I confess to being a bit surprised about. And this definitely puts a different spin on that scene. *g* Thank you for sharing!

[bradygirl_12]

Wheee! This was awesome. <3 Carter makes an excellent third person perspective, which I confess to being a bit surprised about.

Carter seemed like a very bright guy to me. ;)

And this definitely puts a different spin on that scene. *g* Thank you for sharing!

*grins*

Yes, that classic scene had a lot going on underneath the surface. ;)

I'm glad you liked it, Crimson! It was a wonderful pairing/prompt! :)

[siriusfanatic]

Love this, very much like the third person perspective, the way you described the flirtation and the jail scene. Good stuff, good stuff. Love the subtext!!

[bradygirl_12]

Love this, very much like the third person perspective, the way you described the flirtation and the jail scene. Good stuff, good stuff. Love the subtext!!

*beams*

Thank you, Sirius!

We Mel/Johnny lovers have to mine this scene for all its worth, eh? :)