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northern_star July 18 2009, 04:23:36 UTC
Holy....., Batman!! *giggles*

They should so have brought Bruce on the show this way. hehehe! (what? a girl can dream, no?)

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bradygirl_12 July 18 2009, 22:50:15 UTC
Holy....., Batman!! *giggles*

They should so have brought Bruce on the show this way. hehehe! (what? a girl can dream, no?)

Oh, yeah! :)

Bruce meeting Clark in Metropolis while Clark was on Red K? Gives new meaning to the word 'sexy'. ;)

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hitokaji July 18 2009, 08:08:42 UTC
Mmmmm... this is going to be good. ;)
I like this side of Clark too.
Can't wait for the next part!

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bradygirl_12 July 18 2009, 22:52:07 UTC
Mmmmm... this is going to be good. ;)
I like this side of Clark too.
Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you, Hito! Bad boy Clark is always fun! :)

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anonymous July 18 2009, 12:48:24 UTC
Love it so far and I look forward to the next part. But one nitpick is if Clark is under the influence of Red K and in the city in between "Exodus" and "Exile" (if I remember correctly) then he called himself Kal. He was hiding from his parents.

Angeloz

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bradygirl_12 July 18 2009, 22:54:19 UTC
Love it so far and I look forward to the next part. But one nitpick is if Clark is under the influence of Red K and in the city in between "Exodus" and "Exile" (if I remember correctly) then he called himself Kal. He was hiding from his parents.

Angeloz

It's been a long time since I've seen these episodes. :)

I'll just say that he felt like being Clark this time around. ;)

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anonymous July 19 2009, 06:20:19 UTC
That's alright. Sorry to cause worry. I hope we get an epilogue where they meet up again years later. Or am I just too caught up in anticipation. 'Cos I'm also thinking I'm going to enjoy the next chapter.

Angeloz

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bradygirl_12 July 19 2009, 21:26:30 UTC
I think you'll like the next chapter! :)

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ava_jamison July 18 2009, 14:29:55 UTC
Bradygirl_12, this EXCELLENT.

Amazingly, gorgeously written.

Well done erotica! About two guys who are so far sitting in a bar and playing some pool. ON THE SURFACE:)

VERY well done. Breathtakingly nice language choices.

I think I love the caress as he withdraws after shaking best-elegantly written-but it's all really good.

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bradygirl_12 July 18 2009, 23:10:29 UTC
Bradygirl_12, this EXCELLENT.

Amazingly, gorgeously written.

*beams*

Thank you, Ava! :)

Well done erotica! About two guys who are so far sitting in a bar and playing some pool. ON THE SURFACE:)

*grins*

Sometimes it's sexier with their clothes ON. ;)

VERY well done. Breathtakingly nice language choices.

I think I love the caress as he withdraws after shaking best-elegantly written-but it's all really good.

Thank you so much! :)

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ava_jamison July 18 2009, 23:42:29 UTC
Sometimes it's sexier with their clothes ON. ;)

Oh, very much agreed, and I think you've proved it here in spades!

I am VERRRRRY taken with the sexy here. Swear to god, they can go get a cup of coffee next and I'll be just fiiiine.

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bradygirl_12 July 18 2009, 23:52:40 UTC
Sometimes it's sexier with their clothes ON. ;)

Oh, very much agreed, and I think you've proved it here in spades!

I am VERRRRRY taken with the sexy here. Swear to god, they can go get a cup of coffee next and I'll be just fiiiine.

LOL!

Well, they're not exactly having coffee in the next chapter, but I know what you mean. ;)

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bradygirl_12 July 18 2009, 23:14:01 UTC
There can never be enough hooker!Clark stories. ;)

LOL! I agree! :)

Eager to see where this one goes!

I think you'll like it. :)

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