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Fic: Wings Of Darkness Trilogy Book I: One Honest Man (5/5)

Mar 15, 2009 23:26

Title: Wings Of Darkness Trilogy Book I: One Honest Man (5/5 ( Read more... )

batman begins, bruce wayne/jim gordon, the dark knight, wings of darkness, batman/jim gordon

Comments 27

mithen March 16 2009, 12:54:12 UTC

Doubtful he hangs out with the other angels. He must be quite a damper on parties.

LOL! Oh Jim, I love how he doesn't take Batman too seriously even as a literal Angel of Death.

bradygirl_12 March 16 2009, 17:03:18 UTC

Doubtful he hangs out with the other angels. He must be quite a damper on parties.

LOL! Oh Jim, I love how he doesn't take Batman too seriously even as a literal Angel of Death.

Jim needs a sense of humor in that city! ;)

brushed_velvet March 16 2009, 23:29:50 UTC

I find it immensely interesting that even though Jim veers between pity and wariness of Bruce he always seems to still feel at ease around him somehow.

And oh! making Bruce Jim's Guardian Angel is just a gorgeous prospect. I'm actually looking forward to all the UST I'm hoping will develop.

And weirdly, even though Bruce is an Angel of Death, I really want to huggle him here.

This is a great concept you've got going on. I just wish each chapter itself was longer but then when it comes to this pairing I'm immensely greedy, lol.

bradygirl_12 March 17 2009, 00:48:21 UTC

I find it immensely interesting that even though Jim veers between pity and wariness of Bruce he always seems to still feel at ease around him somehow.

I'm glad you noticed that. :)

And oh! making Bruce Jim's Guardian Angel is just a gorgeous prospect. I'm actually looking forward to all the UST I'm hoping will develop.

It should be interesting for the Commish to have his very own personal Angel! :)

And weirdly, even though Bruce is an Angel of Death, I really want to huggle him here.

Not weird! I want to do the same! :)

This is a great concept you've got going on.

Thank you! :)

I just wish each chapter itself was longer but then when it comes to this pairing I'm immensely greedy, lol.

*laughs*

Book II is about 4 chapters and I suspect the third book will be longer.

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bradygirl_12 March 17 2009, 03:44:13 UTC

I like the contrast in dialogue between Gordon and Angel of Death. AoD is so stern and foreboding and serious, while Gordon's almost like, "So, um, who are you, again!?!?"

LOL!

And yeah, this...

The Angel of Death watched over his charge.

Protect.

Look...

...but do not touch.

Hope that doesn't last too long! Teehee!

Now would I be that mean? ;)

living_to_read March 17 2009, 17:17:14 UTC

I really liked this first part.
Look forward to see where it goes from here.

bradygirl_12 March 17 2009, 21:43:30 UTC

I really liked this first part.
Look forward to see where it goes from here.

Thank you! :)

bat_angelwings March 17 2009, 19:11:53 UTC

Death flew away, terrible in his majesty.

Well that's our Bruce, terrible in flight. ;-)

Angel of Death as a Guardian Angel....that will be very interesting.

Can't wait to read the next arc.

One tiny question: In "The Better Angels" I thought Death and Kal were together.....I wonder if we get to see jealous Kal later...;-)

bradygirl_12 March 17 2009, 21:54:41 UTC

Death flew away, terrible in his majesty.

Well that's our Bruce, terrible in flight. ;-)

Aww, just because Clark and Dick are better at it... ;)

Angel of Death as a Guardian Angel....that will be very interesting.

Jim will be the safest man in Gotham! :)

Can't wait to read the next arc.

One tiny question: In "The Better Angels" I thought Death and Kal were together.....I wonder if we get to see jealous Kal later...;-)

No worries! This is an AU of that AU. ;)