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milleniumrex January 7 2009, 04:13:13 UTC
Hee! This was so much fun. I loved the little inside look at what the JLA does when they think no one's looking. And Clark and Lois are great together. :)

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bradygirl_12 January 7 2009, 04:23:10 UTC
Hee! This was so much fun. I loved the little inside look at what the JLA does when they think no one's looking.

*grins*

Thanks, Rex! :)

It's fun to 'spy' on the heroes! ;)

And Clark and Lois are great together. :)

They sure are a great pair! :)

BTW, your request fic's first draft has been written. I hope to post sometime soon! :)

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_steelphoenix_ January 7 2009, 04:53:05 UTC
Hehe. I love this portrayal of Lois; she's fun and sassy and cute.

The 'Being in space, framed by the sun and the Earth, was the very essence of Clark himself.' line is just so true, and a very moving image. :)

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bradygirl_12 January 7 2009, 05:12:53 UTC
Hehe. I love this portrayal of Lois; she's fun and sassy and cute.

She is definitely all of these! :)

The 'Being in space, framed by the sun and the Earth, was the very essence of Clark himself.' line is just so true, and a very moving image. :)

Thank you! :)

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crooked_halo January 7 2009, 07:02:16 UTC
This was lovely!

Lois as insightful observer works very well! I loved the way you described the JL and especially Clark through her eyes.

Lovely!

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bradygirl_12 January 7 2009, 17:16:11 UTC
This was lovely!

Lois as insightful observer works very well! I loved the way you described the JL and especially Clark through her eyes.

Lovely!

Thank you, Halo! :)

Lois is a sharp cookie. There's a reason she's one of the best reporters in the business! :)

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svgurl January 7 2009, 08:59:06 UTC
You wrote Clois! *bounces* I love the way you write those two. It's just so cute. Your Lois is spot on.

“Be good.”

“Ha! You sure you want that, Smallville?”

LOL Great dialogue! I could just see it in my head.

And I love Lois watching him, admiring his beauty. I think I would be awestruck, just like her.

Wonderful job!

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bradygirl_12 January 7 2009, 17:18:37 UTC
You wrote Clois! *bounces* I love the way you write those two. It's just so cute. Your Lois is spot on.

Yes, I was requested to do so! :)

And I'm glad my Clois worked for you. :)

"Be good."

"Ha! You sure you want that, Smallville?"

LOL Great dialogue! I could just see it in my head.

This was comics Lois, as requested, but she is sassy in any version! :)

And I love Lois watching him, admiring his beauty. I think I would be awestruck, just like her.

Yeah, Clark is easy to admire. :)

Wonderful job!

Thank you! :)

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bradygirl_12 January 7 2009, 17:23:52 UTC
I can't stop smiling after reading this, great job! I loved Lois' curiousness, lol. Thank you so much for writing this :)

Lois could own the Ol' Curiosity Shoppe! ;)

She is one curious woman! :)

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