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theclexfactor September 16 2008, 02:31:14 UTC
Oh man, jealous!Bruce is my FAVORITE THING EVER. I can't wait to read the rest, dear!

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bradygirl_12 September 16 2008, 02:47:44 UTC
Oh man, jealous!Bruce is my FAVORITE THING EVER.

Heh, jealous!Bruce is awfully fun. :)

I can't wait to read the rest, dear!

Thank you, Clex! :)

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saavikam77 September 16 2008, 02:57:49 UTC
Oh, Bruce... *hugs him* I love that you wrote this from his POV, love that twinge of jealousy, even though he's not yet open (even with himself) about his feelings for Clark.

And the descriptions! Just gorgeous... I bet Rai could do this AU wonderful justice... ^_^

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bradygirl_12 September 16 2008, 03:18:27 UTC
Oh, Bruce... *hugs him* I love that you wrote this from his POV, love that twinge of jealousy, even though he's not yet open (even with himself) about his feelings for Clark.

Getting into the mind of the Bat. Scary! ;)

There will be a few scenes from Clark's POV, too, but it's mainly Bruce this time around. :)

And the descriptions! Just gorgeous... I bet Rai could do this AU wonderful justice... ^_^

Thank you, Saavi! :)

Ooh! I'd be honored if Rai was inspired to draw anything from this story. Let's hope some bunnies nibble at her. ;)

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ladybugkay September 16 2008, 04:58:05 UTC
Man, I love DC fanfic. Because all those tropes of alternate realities and time travel and other such crazy happenings, are legitimate fodder for fic. *g*

And how much do I love that Bruce gets jealous of himself? LOL

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bradygirl_12 September 16 2008, 15:54:35 UTC
Man, I love DC fanfic. Because all those tropes of alternate realities and time travel and other such crazy happenings, are legitimate fodder for fic. *g*

Isn't it great? We have so much to work with! :)

And how much do I love that Bruce gets jealous of himself? LOL

*snickers*

Bruce is quite possessive of the people he loves, even if he doesn't realize he loves them! ;)

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jij September 16 2008, 05:21:39 UTC
Oh, a gleaming Gotham is sure to throw Bruce for a loop! I enjoyed his possessiveness and lack of full self-awareness, the poor dear...

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bradygirl_12 September 16 2008, 15:56:44 UTC
Oh, a gleaming Gotham is sure to throw Bruce for a loop!

More descriptions of both cities to come. :)

Also a few more details about their costumes. ;)

I enjoyed his possessiveness and lack of full self-awareness, the poor dear...

Bruce loves sailing the Nile. ;)

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svgurl September 16 2008, 05:38:06 UTC
You're just amazing and this story is fabulous. I'm loving it already. &hearts

Alternate universes, time travel, jealous!Bruce ... there's just so much to YAY about!

His Clark nodded. I’d decided that it was a lot easier to designate them ‘his’ and ‘my’. Less confusion.

Sure, Bruce, we totally believe you there. He just likes the idea of calling Clark "his". He's so adorable when he's in denial. ;)

Loved how he was jealous of the other Bruce and aww, I love the other Clark. He was so sad when he heard about that gays couldn't get married. *huggles him*

Fantastic start! I can't wait to see what will happen next!

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bradygirl_12 September 16 2008, 16:05:31 UTC
You're just amazing and this story is fabulous. I'm loving it already. ♥

Aww, thanks, sweetie! :)

Alternate universes, time travel, jealous!Bruce ... there's just so much to YAY about!

It's tons of fun, isn't it? :)

His Clark nodded. I’d decided that it was a lot easier to designate them ‘his’ and ‘my’. Less confusion.

Sure, Bruce, we totally believe you there. He just likes the idea of calling Clark "his". He's so adorable when he's in denial. ;)

Totally believe him! ;)

Loved how he was jealous of the other Bruce and aww, I love the other Clark. He was so sad when he heard about that gays couldn't get married. *huggles him*

Clark is always so sweet! :)

And a jealous Bruce is always fun! :)

Fantastic start! I can't wait to see what will happen next!

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