Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (RobinSong Arc) (25/41)

Aug 23, 2008 22:49

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (RobinSong Arc) (25/41)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Alfred, Dick
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. As Bruce and Clark try and adjust to being lovers as well as Master and slave, on a warm ( Read more... )

dick grayson, superman/batman, robinsong arc, robin, alfred pennyworth, clark kent/bruce wayne, rainbow's freedom

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anonymous August 24 2008, 09:46:22 UTC
The waiting for a new update is always killing me (I’m a very impatient person :)). But this new chapter was so worth waiting for!
I really didn’t find one single sentence which I wouldn’t love in this chapter. I was so proud of Bruce. He was always a good man. But Alfred, Clark and Dick changed him even more since the beginning of this story. Now he understood well how important they all are for him. I was a little puzzled with the name of this chapter. NOT JUST A HOUSEHOLD. But the ending explained it amazingly. A Family - Oh Bruce, I think I really love you! :)
I am only a little sad Martha and Clark aren’t going to meet yet. But there is probably a reason. And it is better this way for now. I get it.
Thank you very much for this amazing, touching, astonishingly well written update BradyGirl.:)
LS

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bradygirl_12 August 24 2008, 20:11:21 UTC
The waiting for a new update is always killing me (I’m a very impatient person :)). But this new chapter was so worth waiting for!

LOL! Thank you, LS! I love your enthusiasm! :)

I really didn’t find one single sentence which I wouldn’t love in this chapter. I was so proud of Bruce. He was always a good man. But Alfred, Clark and Dick changed him even more since the beginning of this story. Now he understood well how important they all are for him.

Bingo! Give that woman a kewpie doll! :)

Very true. All three have changed him.

I was a little puzzled with the name of this chapter. NOT JUST A HOUSEHOLD. But the ending explained it amazingly. A Family - Oh Bruce, I think I really love you! :)

He's bowed to the inevitable. ;)

I am only a little sad Martha and Clark aren’t going to meet yet. But there is probably a reason. And it is better this way for now. I get it.

Yes, Martha discovering her son would mess things up right now. ;) But she will find out the truth in the future, that I can say. :)

Thank you very much for this ( ... )

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bradygirl_12 August 24 2008, 20:24:09 UTC
I adored this part, feelings were shared that needed to be said, even if they knew it all along.

Yes! We know that Bruce isn't much of a divulger of feelings, but he knew that he had to let his slaves know exactly where he stood, and they wanted to let him know how much they loved him, too. :)

And I feel proud of Bruce too, taking steps forward in getting better treatment for slaves.

He has done some of that in the past, but he's really stepping things up now. :)

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enderwiggin24 August 24 2008, 11:33:01 UTC
god, yes yes, they are his family, and he is their family.

the emotions, here , with them four all together... My heart melts :D

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bradygirl_12 August 24 2008, 20:32:55 UTC
god, yes yes, they are his family, and he is their family.

*nods happily*

the emotions, here , with them four all together... My heart melts :D

*grins*

Love is in the air! :)

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genclay August 24 2008, 14:47:14 UTC
awwwwwwwww.

This gives me warm fuzzy feelings.

Though it also makes my hackles rise. Things are going to well. Something is going to go wrong for the poor deers :/

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bradygirl_12 August 24 2008, 20:35:58 UTC
awwwwwwwww.

This gives me warm fuzzy feelings.

:)

Though it also makes my hackles rise. Things are going to well. Something is going to go wrong for the poor dears :/

Can't have it all smooth sailing, can we? ;)

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genclay August 24 2008, 20:39:33 UTC
You know something? I'm taking back the 'you rock' statment and making into 'Your evil!'

:p

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bradygirl_12 August 24 2008, 20:46:05 UTC
You know something? I'm taking back the 'you rock' statment and making into 'Your evil!'

:p

*evil cackle* ;)

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bat_angelwings August 25 2008, 06:46:48 UTC
About time!
Took Bruce long enough to finally realize all the important people in his life are slaves.

I see bad things happen in the future...just a gut feeling..so far...but....:-)

As always can't wait for the next chapter!

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bradygirl_12 August 25 2008, 16:41:51 UTC
About time!
Took Bruce long enough to finally realize all the important people in his life are slaves.

Oh, I think he knew it before this, but just never actually admitted it to himself, y'know? :)

I see bad things happen in the future...just a gut feeling..so far...but....:-)

There are certainly trials and tribulations in the arcs ahead! :)

As always can't wait for the next chapter!

*grins*

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