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Fic: Yellow Roses (II): (The Morning After)

Feb 27, 2007 21:10

Title: Yellow Roses (II): (The Morning After)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: One way to use rose petals the morning after Valentine’s Day.
Date Of Completion: February 27, 2007
Date Of Posting: February 27, 2007
Word Count: 401
Disclaimer: DC owns ‘em, I just play with ‘em.
Title: ( Read more... )

holiday, yellow roses, clark kent/bruce wayne, valentine's day, chocolate, superman/batman, food, challenge

Comments 21

luxluthor February 28 2007, 03:03:09 UTC

Awwww, This was so lovely!!!!!
So sweet:)
I loved the yellow petals,
Lux

bradygirl_12 March 1 2007, 01:51:23 UTC

Heh, I know! The yellow petals got to me, too! :)

fenm February 28 2007, 03:22:15 UTC

"They’re the color of the sun."

Oh, nice touch! This was very sweet. ^_^

bradygirl_12 March 1 2007, 01:52:13 UTC

Thank you! Bruce can get quite sweet when he allows himself. :)

wachey February 28 2007, 04:57:59 UTC

I loved the last line! And how you put details about their hair, eyes, the roses, and everything else! I was able to view this fic in my mind so easily!

bradygirl_12 March 1 2007, 01:53:37 UTC

Thank you, Wachey! It makes me feel good as an author to know that you were able to picture the scene so easily because of my words. :)

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bradygirl_12 March 1 2007, 01:57:03 UTC

Thank you, Merfilly! Playful and romantic is what I was aiming for! :)

jij February 28 2007, 15:08:30 UTC

Mmmm, the image of Clark on red satin sheets with yellow petals caught in his dark hair will be with me for some time now. I like it very much. *grin* Thank you!

bradygirl_12 March 1 2007, 02:01:47 UTC

LOL! It *is* quite an image, isn't it? Glad you liked it!