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Fic: Stained Glass I: Shattered (4/10)

Jan 31, 2008 00:20

Title: Stained Glass I: Shattered (4/10)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Steve/Diana
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings (this chapter): None
Spoilers: References in various chapters to events in "Until The Yellow Sun Blesses You Again...".
General Summary: Diana and Steve’s love has ( Read more... )

steve trevor/wonder woman, shattered, stained glass, steve trevor/diana prince

Comments 9

greeneyelove January 31 2008, 05:48:40 UTC

Oh poor Steve. I feel so badly for him and Diana. I know it's going to get much worse for them before it gets better.

You still have me on the edge of my seat.

bradygirl_12 January 31 2008, 06:05:46 UTC

Oh poor Steve. I feel so badly for him and Diana. I know it's going to get much worse for them before it gets better.

You're right about that!

You still have me on the edge of my seat.

Glad to hear it! Thanks, Green Eyes! :)

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bradygirl_12 January 31 2008, 18:04:52 UTC

Oh poor Diana.

And Steve.

*nods*

They're both suffering, poor souls.

I do like the way you've opted to go about this, portraying the ramifications of what happened.

Thank you, Merfilly! I'm mixing in some action down the road, but everything is overshadowed by what happened, of course.

starsandsea January 31 2008, 19:38:29 UTC

Diana didn’t know whether to be relieved or scared to death.

*hugs Diana*

She blinked back tears as she tried to get some sleep.

Ouchy!!!

Diana ached to hold him in her arms but every time her hand or leg touched his, he backed away, not exactly flinching, but keeping a small distance.

It broke her heart.

*hugs Diana again*

Oh poor Diana and Steve! :(

More soon?

bradygirl_12 February 1 2008, 03:06:21 UTC

Diana didn’t know whether to be relieved or scared to death.

*hugs Diana*

She needs the hugs, poor dear. :(

She blinked back tears as she tried to get some sleep.

Ouchy!!!

*pets Diana*

Diana ached to hold him in her arms but every time her hand or leg touched his, he backed away, not exactly flinching, but keeping a small distance.

It broke her heart.

*hugs Diana again*

She wasn't hurt the way Steve was, but she's hurting just the same.

Oh poor Diana and Steve! :(

More soon?

I should have a new chapter posted either tonight or tomorrow, hopefully. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Star! :)

rocaw January 31 2008, 21:44:51 UTC

Sometimes the hardest part--the readjusting--comes after the battle. Besides the memory loss, I hope that's all that's happening with Steve right now.

bradygirl_12 February 1 2008, 03:08:39 UTC

Sometimes the hardest part--the readjusting--comes after the battle. Besides the memory loss, I hope that's all that's happening with Steve right now.

Yeah, the mind is a funny thing, but also protective. Steve can't handle what happened right now and so he's suppressed the memory.

Unfortunately, memories have their way of coming back. :(

jij February 1 2008, 11:53:59 UTC

Oh, Steve with PTSD is so sad! I'm very glad we're not in his head right now, to be honest, because I'm sure it's a very bad place. Poor Diana, watching her heart break is terribly painful as well...

bradygirl_12 February 1 2008, 18:00:11 UTC

Oh, Steve with PTSD is so sad! I'm very glad we're not in his head right now, to be honest, because I'm sure it's a very bad place.

It's a place of worry and confusion interspersed with a strange calm, and we'll see some of that in the next chapter.

Poor Diana, watching her heart break is terribly painful as well...

It's been tough to write! :(

Thank you for reading and writing, Jen! :)