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Fic: Rainbow's Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (34/35) (Part 1)

Jan 12, 2008 01:24

Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (Shadow Of The Bat Arc) (34/35) (Part 1)
Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Clark/Bruce, Alfred, Kathy Kane, Jonathan Kent/Martha Kent
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. The wealthy freeman Bruce Wayne acquires ( Read more... )

superman/batman, shadow of the bat arc, kathy kane, alfred pennyworth, clark kent/bruce wayne, jonathan kent/martha kent, rainbow's freedom

Comments 7

greeneyelove January 12 2008, 14:15:25 UTC

Great job painting a happy scene and building up tension to the vote. I adore Bruce being so determined to protect Alfred and Clark!

bradygirl_12 January 14 2008, 02:28:17 UTC

Great job painting a happy scene and building up tension to the vote. I adore Bruce being so determined to protect Alfred and Clark!

Thank you, Green Eyes! :)

Voting roll calls can be great drama! :)

And Bruce would try very hard to figure out a way to keep Clark and Alfred from undergoing such an indignity (not to mention pain!). If he couldn't succeed, it wouldn't be for lack of trying.

ranger_girl0301 January 12 2008, 16:27:13 UTC

Thank goodness you posted the other part! Going now.

bradygirl_12 January 14 2008, 02:29:56 UTC

Thank goodness you posted the other part! Going now.

LOL! See you there! :)

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bradygirl_12 January 14 2008, 02:33:07 UTC

The tension is so thick, where the happy scene at the beginning is covered by this vote.

*crosses fingers and goes to next part*

Yep, start happy and see what comes next. :)

starsandsea January 12 2008, 19:09:50 UTC

Bruce was putting the finishing touches on a mince pie.

OMG!! You let Bruce cook!!!! *looks for the inevitable fire*

Master Bruce was happy, probably truly so for the first time in years, and Clark was like a miniature sun, his happiness overflowing.

Awwwww! *glomps them*

“The vote on the Branding Bill is coming up now…” said the radio announcer.

Meeep!

They would leave you if they were free.

No, they wouldn’t.

Mwhaha!!! Take that, scary Bat-voice of doom! lol

Like hell! I’ll bribe the branders if I have to. They are not going to be branded, end of story!

Yay!!! *cheers Bruce*

Bruce watched with interest, smiling as the camera caught Martha Kent.

Probably a good job Clark was out of the room then...

The roll call began.

Eeep! *runs to the next part*

bradygirl_12 January 14 2008, 02:38:44 UTC

Bruce was putting the finishing touches on a mince pie.

OMG!! You let Bruce cook!!!! *looks for the inevitable fire*

LOL! He's under close supervision. :)

Master Bruce was happy, probably truly so for the first time in years, and Clark was like a miniature sun, his happiness overflowing.

Awwwww! *glomps them*

Aren't they so very pretty when they're happy? :)

"The vote on the Branding Bill is coming up now..." said the radio announcer.

Meeep!

*scurries*

They would leave you if they were free.

Poor, insecure Bruce.

No, they wouldn’t.

Mwhaha!!! Take that, scary Bat-voice of doom! lol

;)

Like hell! I’ll bribe the branders if I have to. They are not going to be branded, end of story!

Yay!!! *cheers Bruce*

You know he'll take care of them.

Bruce watched with interest, smiling as the camera caught Martha Kent.

Probably a good job Clark was out of the room then...

I doubt he'd recognize either Martha or Jonathan with his amnesia, but you never know. :)

The roll call began.

Eeep! *runs to the next part*See you there ( ... )