Nice drabble. Love the descriptions. Dialogue was used well, too. As for the historical issue, eh, you had to do that to fit the Steve/Diana pairing and its timeline, and it worked out just fine (liked the part with Steve carrying the banner). You certainly haven't lost your touch, since I last read your work.
Nice drabble. Love the descriptions. Dialogue was used well, too.
Thank you! This was a very visual fic for me, and as for the dialogue, I felt that less was more. :)
As for the historical issue, eh, you had to do that to fit the Steve/Diana pairing and its timeline, and it worked out just fine (liked the part with Steve carrying the banner).
I figured since it was already an AU, I could make some historical changes. :)
You certainly haven't lost your touch, since I last read your work.
Oh, what beautiful descriptions! I love that first image of her and Steve together, just lovely...
Thank you, Mithen! :)
The theme of this story definitely brought out the lyrical in me. Steve and Diana are the perfect couple when it comes to the mythical and legendary. :)
Ooooh, this was so beautiful! Such lyrical language, and the story itself-! *hearts Steve and Diana* I love that Diana came back when Steve spoke her name when he was ill, how perfect! And then that they became a legend... *flails*
Thank you so much for this wonderful birthday gift, Brady! :)
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Thank you! This was a very visual fic for me, and as for the dialogue, I felt that less was more. :)
As for the historical issue, eh, you had to do that to fit the Steve/Diana pairing and its timeline, and it worked out just fine (liked the part with Steve carrying the banner).
I figured since it was already an AU, I could make some historical changes. :)
You certainly haven't lost your touch, since I last read your work.
*beams*
Thank you kindly! :)
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Thank you, Mithen! :)
The theme of this story definitely brought out the lyrical in me. Steve and Diana are the perfect couple when it comes to the mythical and legendary. :)
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Thank you so much for this wonderful birthday gift, Brady! :)
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They can sure make you fall in love, eh? :)
I love that Diana came back when Steve spoke her name when he was ill, how perfect! And then that they became a legend... *flails*
Diana would always come back if Steve needed her. And they are so legendary together! :)
Thank you so much for this wonderful birthday gift, Brady! :)
You're welcome, honey. :)
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Thank you! It was a pleasure to write. :)
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AWWWW!
The Great Amazonia and her handsome blond General would live forever.
YES!
Beautiful story!
Thank you for sharing this, Brady. :)
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AWWWW!
Their love is forever. :)
The Great Amazonia and her handsome blond General would live forever.
YES!
The stuff from which legends are made. :)
Beautiful story!
Thank you for sharing this, Brady. :)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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