Fic: The Soldier And The Scientist VIII: "The Stars Have Dimmed..." (1/1)

[bradygirl_12]

Title: The Soldier And The Scientist VIII: "The Stars Have Dimmed..." (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Steve/Tony, Natasha Romanoff, Bucky Barnes, Bruce Banner, Dummy, Thor Odinson
Continuity: Captain America: The First Avenger and The Avengers (2012)Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, A Touch Of Romance

Comments

[mithen]

It was quiet enough to hear the ticking of the clock on the mantelpiece. Tony had built it with a modern appearance but old-fashioned ticking.

Oh, what a lovely detail in a quiet, bittersweet story...I really love this idea, and I could hear it tick all the way through the scenes, like a little heart. So sweet and sad and wonderful!

[bradygirl_12]

It was quiet enough to hear the ticking of the clock on the mantelpiece. Tony had built it with a modern appearance but old-fashioned ticking.

Oh, what a lovely detail in a quiet, bittersweet story...I really love this idea, and I could hear it tick all the way through the scenes, like a little heart. So sweet and sad and wonderful!

Thank you! The ticking of the clock underscored the quiet atmosphere that I was going for, so I'm glad you picked out that detail. :)