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Fic: Red Sky At Morning I: Painting 'N' Pie (1/1)

Aug 05, 2013 11:43

Title: Red Sky At Morning I: Painting 'N' Pie (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Jonathan/Martha, Clark/Bruce
Continuity: Batman Begins/The Man Of Steel
Genres: AU (Some change in canon), Slice-Of-Pie, er, Life ;)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: For Man Of Steel
Summary: Martha finds Clark’s new boss at The Daily Planet to be ( Read more... )

batman begins, superman/batman, man of steel, clark kent/bruce wayne, jonathan kent/martha kent, red sky at morning

Comments 15

rileyc August 5 2013, 17:22:32 UTC

Awwww... Love this!

Great "meet the parents" story, and I love that it's from Martha's point of view. She would notice all the little things and be conscious of the contrasts between her home and what Bruce is used to, as well as being protective of Clark.

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

bradygirl_12 August 5 2013, 17:29:20 UTC

Awwww... Love this!

*beams*

Thank you! :)

Great "meet the parents" story, and I love that it's from Martha's point of view. She would notice all the little things and be conscious of the contrasts between her home and what Bruce is used to, as well as being protective of Clark.

A mother knows! ;) I liked the portrayal of Martha in MOS and knew she'd be very observant, as she is in all incarnations. And she'd be very protective of Clark against the rich boss who just doesn't know well yet.

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Thank you! I definitely have some more ideas. I just need to finish my Avengers beach vacation story! ;)

rileyc August 5 2013, 18:53:06 UTC

Oh, forgot to say I love you have Jonathan alive. Love the way he and Martha are portrayed here, the teasing that highlights the love. And Jonathan's banter with Bruce was a huge treat. :)

BTW, I keep meaning to ask and then always forgetting, but the poems you use to start off your stories, are those real or do you make them up?

bradygirl_12 August 5 2013, 22:38:54 UTC

Oh, forgot to say I love you have Jonathan alive.

Thank you! :)

I really disliked the way Jonathan died in the movie. It just seemed so stupid and wasteful! I'm sure Clark could have figured out some way to fool people to save his own father! Just another heaping of angst onto his head. >:(

Love the way he and Martha are portrayed here, the teasing that highlights the love. And Jonathan's banter with Bruce was a huge treat. :)

I figure Jonathan has a dry sense of humor. He and Bruce would get along quite well. :)

BTW, I keep meaning to ask and then always forgetting, but the poems you use to start off your stories, are those real or do you make them up?

99% of them are my creations. Once in awhile I may take a real quote from somewhere (a poem or song or speech) but most are my little cherries on top of the sundae. Or pie, in this case. ;)

phoenixnz August 5 2013, 18:21:49 UTC

I love that you've written this from Martha's p.o.v. You've certainly got me intrigued, wondering what is really going on with Bruce and Clark. I would love to see more when you can.

bradygirl_12 August 5 2013, 18:27:10 UTC

I love that you've written this from Martha's p.o.v. You've certainly got me intrigued, wondering what is really going on with Bruce and Clark. I would love to see more when you can.

Thank you, m'dear! It might be slow in coming but I've got IDEAS! ;)

Martha seemed like the right POV for this particular story. :)

walkonwaterbabe August 5 2013, 19:06:02 UTC

Love this it was so cute and sweet, are you going to contine writing this story

bradygirl_12 August 5 2013, 22:42:06 UTC

Love this it was so cute and sweet, are you going to contine writing this story.

Thanks, dear! :)

I intend to write more. Whether or not RL lets me, we'll see! :)

walkonwaterbabe August 6 2013, 01:53:22 UTC

Ok I'm going to be a little nit picky, but when does this story take place in the dark knight saga, and are you dive into Bruce/Clark's travels and their fights against Zod and presuming Ra al ghul, sorry I'm kinda a detail fiend

bradygirl_12 August 6 2013, 15:22:38 UTC

Batman Begins is listed because it's the BB Bruce I'm crossing over with MOS Clark. I'm not sure if I'll be flashing back to their travels or not in this particular series, and they won't be fighting against Zod. He's already gone and Batman wasn't involved in the fight against the Kryptonians in Metropolis, unless my Muse goes that way eventually. The series is very loose right now at the moment. :)

walkonwaterbabe August 6 2013, 15:34:14 UTC

You should dig deeper into their travels, because that would cool to read about, and I understand that this is set after zod is defeted, I should have made that coment a little clearer by writing are they going to talk about the aftermath of their fights with zod and Ra al ghul with each other.