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Fic: The Soldier And the Scientist VII: Waterfall (1/1)

May 10, 2013 18:36

Title: The Soldier And The Scientist VII: Waterfall (1/1)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: Bruce Banner, Natasha Romanoff (Natasha/Pepper mentioned), Thor Odinson, Steve/Tony, Clint/Phil
Continuity: The Avengers (2012)
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: PTSD
Spoilers: For Captain America: The First Avenger (2011 ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

northernwalker May 11 2013, 00:24:10 UTC

Aww, poor Steve. And Tony.

bradygirl_12 May 11 2013, 16:02:27 UTC

Aww, poor Steve. And Tony.

I know. It won't be easy, but they love each other, so they'll get through it.

kat1132 May 11 2013, 22:39:24 UTC

I really enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt, but I feel like there's more to be said here, especially with how detailed the beginning is.

If I were Steve's lover and he told me that he'd lost everything, and then started crying uncontrollably, certainly I'd try and help him calm down, but there'd be that niggling self doubt that would creep in about whether or not Steve thought that the tradeoff would be worth it. Tony's character can often be insecure about things, and I think it would nag at him until they hashed it out.

Anyway you'd be willing to add more?

bradygirl_12 May 12 2013, 23:13:01 UTC

I really enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt, but I feel like there's more to be said here, especially with how detailed the beginning is.

Your instincts are correct, m'dear! :)

If I were Steve's lover and he told me that he'd lost everything, and then started crying uncontrollably, certainly I'd try and help him calm down, but there'd be that niggling self doubt that would creep in about whether or not Steve thought that the tradeoff would be worth it. Tony's character can often be insecure about things, and I think it would nag at him until they hashed it out.

Oh, Tony! You and your insecurities! :)

Anyway you'd be willing to add more?

I plan on it. :) As this is a series, there is a lot more story to be told! :) I thank you for your enthusiasm. That really fires me up! It may help me get jump-started quicker on the next segment, too. :)

mithen May 13 2013, 13:44:46 UTC

bradygirl_12 May 13 2013, 16:42:25 UTC

As Tony went over the side, Steve saw Bucky as he fell to his death in the icy mountains as the train roared down the tracks.

Oooh, I really like how you triggered Steve's angst over Bucky here! How awful for Tony--but I love how supportive and sweet he and all the Avengers were. Poor, poor Steve...I can only imagine how this next movie is going to put him through the wringer, and you set the stage so well!

Thanks, Mithen! Steve is really suffering here, and you're right, the next movie should put him through the wringer. He's mourning over Bucky and then finds out what really happened to him, which might be worse!

Great anonymous May 15 2013, 23:57:07 UTC

Great story. Poor steve. If I a, tony I would feel really jealous

Re: Great bradygirl_12 May 17 2013, 18:06:19 UTC

Great story. Poor steve. If I a, tony I would feel really jealous

I agree! They're going to have work things out (once I get the time to write it, heh heh).