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Emi Sekiyama vs Mimiko Hashimoto; Aiko Sakada

Oct 29, 2009 16:03

Attempt found somewhere around here.

Does Emi Sekiyama kill, wound or fail to injure Mimiko Hashimoto?

Does Emi Sekiyama kill, wound or fail to injure Aiko Sakada?

The time this very moment is 1603GMT/1203EST. 24 hours to vote.

standard vote, double vote!, v9

Comments 11

MIMIKO: KILL sjorn October 29 2009, 17:49:17 UTC

Okay. Here goes:

Mimiko: First of all, I think Daviiid's writing is decent. A definite improvement from v8, although there are still quite a few errors, etc - the usual stuff. However, the last few posts... have been kind of messy, and very confusing. At times I didn't know what was going on ( ... )

AIKO: KILL sjorn October 29 2009, 17:58:44 UTC

Aiko: I think the writing is better than Daviiid's, but there are still times when I have no idea what is going on. The Mimiko/Aiko fight was very confusing to read.

Aiko suffers from the same kind of problem as Mimiko, I think. She just has one thing to her: being a lesbian. And in a country where homosexuality is pretty much hated, nobody seems to care much. It'd be okay if she had something else... but she really doesn't. She's The Big Dyke, and that's all.

As I wrote in the Mimiko vote, I have a problem with the Nice Girls. Just read that. :)

NPC/PC control... not the best. The flashback interactions with most people have been okay. Apart from one. The flashback where Hikari magically finds out she's a lesbian. That totally propelled Hikari into a big ass Mary Sue for me, who loves everything and everyone. I thought it was stupid. And here's me nitpicking, but how the hell did she know? She's blind. Isn't stuff like showing you like someone shown through body language? idk. That just ruined Hikari's character for me. However, ( ... )

Mimiko kill, Aiko Kill theonlyjosh October 29 2009, 22:07:20 UTC

Okay, I'm not gonna repeat everything I said in the last vote for Mimiko vs Aiko as only been one post from Danny since then ( ... )

Kill, Kill. pumpkinart October 30 2009, 02:38:34 UTC

Emi: I have to admit here: Emi is probably my favorite chracter this version. Yeah, that's right. :O Zarrah, I was impressed with Emi since the first post. The grammar and dialouge is pretty much pitch-perfect and very realistic, and the characterization is great. I can't help but feel lucky to be paired up with you Zarrah, because I happen to think the reason why Miki/Emi works so well is that you have a great way of explaining their relationship in your posts. I feel that whenever I try to explain the pairing it gets clunky and ham-handed, but your explainations work and read really well. It's obvious there's tension between Miki and Emi, but you know that they're secretly depending on each other. You convey that really well without making it Go-Karting With Bowser (a la TV Tropes). XD

I also like Keisuke's and Emi's relationship and development, but I'm sort of confused at times as to what makes them click, because they're so different. I'm excited with what happens with Keisuke in your next post, though, because I can only ( ... )

Kill Mimiko; Kill Aiko cheesydorito October 30 2009, 03:01:54 UTC

Hopefully these votes won't be long because I just talked about both Mimiko and Aiko in the last vote they were in, and neither have really done anything since then. XD ( ... )