Yukihiko Koyamada [C7-E4] Down in the Gutter

[yuki_yama]

He loves the beach on Nishima Island. He can’t say it’s the best beach ever or something like that because he’s never really been to any others - why go miles and miles for something that’s ten minutes out of your front door? - but as beaches go, he imagines Majima beach to be not that bad, all in all

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[themongers]

-With a loud, sharp smack on his cheek, Koshirou backhanded him across the face.

I defffinitely laughed with I first read this!! In a good way, of course. It's just a great mental picture :'D

For having writer's block, you whipped up a good post. You actually have an interesting and sometimes fun way of wording things in your posts, such as the description of Makoto's Tetris addiction and the "gory beach." That kind of stuff seems to come naturally to you.

[skullduggery]

And most of this island is kids and old people, so there’s a lot of laughs to be had.

Hehe, how frickin' true.

[rietje_1]

I'm really liking Yuki and Koshirou together, it's obvious they're worried and starting to panic a little but it's written on a really calm way, if that makes any sense. The way they try to have faith but even Yuki is not completely sure yet feels sincere to me.

What I liked most was that small moment where Yuki had an - I think - attack and that brief realization that he was probably not going to win, I'm curious to read how you're going to carry this over your future posts.