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Chie Eda - D7-E4 - Kingdom of Rust

May 20, 2010 00:30

It would take twenty two minutes before they called Chie’s name ( Read more... )

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skullduggery May 20 2010, 04:56:52 UTC

OH MY GOD LAURRA WHAT THE HELL. This is so emotional. The narrative is just dropping with melancholy. Good job |D lmfao.

themongers May 20 2010, 06:14:11 UTC

Aww! You made Chie really believable and relatable in this post. So good! C:

koyasaurus May 20 2010, 09:59:44 UTC

Really good job Laurra! It'll be cool to see how Chie develops from this blubbering mess rofl. ♥

sjorn May 20 2010, 11:44:33 UTC

:C I love this, Laurra. You really made everything about how Chie is feeling so clear, and it really feels so innocent. AND MAKOTO AND CHIE AREN'T BAD TOGETHER, EITHER. ♥

themongers May 20 2010, 16:34:01 UTC

I agree! I like the dynamic you guys have going between these two. It reads so well. You're both forces to be reckoned with. :)

rietje_1 May 20 2010, 16:45:23 UTC

Aww, I really liked this, Laurra! Chie is so cute and...I think most of her reactions were very realistic for a teenage girl. Gonna echo the comment about the Chie/Makoto dynamic. ;-)