My last concious breath

[boywholeft]

I gasp for you.
You the busy
You the social
You the uncertain
I am gone
I am needy

There is someone stealing my breath
My porous bags are clogged deep
A sonorous din rises up
It stops short...

Comments

[thyis1]

Hmmm, Curious he replied
I sat there in dumb silence.
what had we been talking about?
Looking back at it all it was i who had made the mistake, not he.
Near the end of it all he sat back with a deep sigh of relief.
So, he stated questionably, what are we going to do.
I looked him dead in the eye and said Why is it up to me to decide?
He said well, you're the wiser one.
Am I?
Yes.
Interesting.
With that his last breath was drawn.
He lay back in silence, his deep blue eyes searching for something in the sky.
He was happy, truly happy.
And so was I.

I don't know what this means, it just came to me. Feel free to find meaning, i know i didn't.

[just_sassy_me]

Isn't it always easier to blame yourself for mistakes rather than others? I mean generally people think that you must blame everyone else around... but I have always found it easier to believe that it was my fault, that I was wrong, that if I was different this never would have happened... maybe its just me.

the grass is greener on the other side...but i cant see that far!!!!

[_dreamisdestiny]

"So, he stated questionably, what are we going to do

Re: the grass is greener on the other side...but i cant see that far!!!!

[_dreamisdestiny]

P.S.
have i told you lately that...
i love you

Re: the grass is greener on the other side...but i cant see that far!!!!

[boywholeft]

Every day you will find me
Wanting you closer
Frustration as proof
Proof as love
Propinquity as happiness

so filling

//FES//

and i you

[_dreamisdestiny]

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