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[boyfrond]

If you came here to help me, you are wasting our time

Comments

[kittenboo]

I really like how the things to do list works with the piece

[onda_bianca]

Great last line...

[dreamsreflected]

I love how you ended this.

[halfshellvenus]

I also liked the integration of the todo list with the piece, partly because it shows the challenges you're facing-- some of them with every repeated day-- and that actual help and not criticism or advice or lecturing could make a difference.

[rayaso]

The to-do list really helped make your entry.