a perfect day for thunder [Luhan/Lay]

[emberberry]

a perfect day for thunder
Luhan/Lay
R, 1,543 words
It takes Luhan forever to get out of bed that morning. Every day it gets a little worse.

a/n: wow, I'm not sure what this is. trying to get back into this…

Comments

[tulita]

i like it, even though it's extremely vague and everything is between the lines. it's fitting.

[emberberry]

thank you :)

[reduxed]

o wow this was a really good read, you worded the story very prettily and the characterizations were amazing ;; thank you so much! ♥

[emberberry]

no, thank you so much! thanks for reading :3

[perkybird]

damn, i really really enjoyed this. your characterizations of luhan and lay were well thought-out, and i particularly loved your writing style: simple and clean, without being too overstated or obvious. wonderful!

thank you so much for this - looking for more in the near future. :')

[emberberry]

aw thank you so much for this wonderful comment :)

[emberberry]

thanks!

[13fireflies]

KAI OMG THE FIC THIS FIC.
Oh god I don't even know where to start.
It's luhan and yixing. This pairing. My soft spot. :3
I love how subtle the relationship between the two of them seems, but deep down inside it's more than that. Well more on yixing's side rather than luhan's, it seems. And the ending!! I especially loved the last couple of sentences. :)
I'm on my phone and I can't quote anything but I shall be back to properly comment. :D
I'm soooo glad you're back to writing!! ♥♥♥♥♥

[emberberry]

Jesssss! ♥ I'm just so relieved that you like it XD take your time, I know you have school (and I have studying to do, lol). so glad you read this ♥♥