The drink felt tangy on my tongue. I closed my eyes and savored the energizing dance of sparkling pomegranate, mouth-watering apple, charged with a sugary after-taste. I swallowed and appreciated the cooling sensation as it traveled through me.
And this...I knew this kind of feeling once though I did not know how to say it as well as you did here:
I loved his throat. I loved his esophagus that pushed the juice down into his stomach. I loved how the organs of his body worked to provide him with the nourishment needed to make him function, as it caused his legs to shiver, the exact same time I did. For the very last time, I loved him. I loved every cell, every atom that made up every organ in his body.
I can see why you won Idol last season!:) You are a skillfully writer but, even more than that, you write with skill AND heart.
Thank you so much! :) Your comment made me so happy. Yeah, that weird organ loving feeling happens often to me, and I am happy other people feel that too.
I like how you wrote about loving his esophagus. I won't lie, that made me smile quite a lot. Because if you love someone's esophagus, it must have been intense.
And then once I got to the end, I felt like I just drove off a cliff. In the good kind of way...because I didn't even know it happened until I crashed.
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The drink felt tangy on my tongue. I closed my eyes and savored the energizing dance of sparkling pomegranate, mouth-watering apple, charged with a sugary after-taste. I swallowed and appreciated the cooling sensation as it traveled through me.
And this...I knew this kind of feeling once though I did not know how to say it as well as you did here:
I loved his throat. I loved his esophagus that pushed the juice down into his stomach. I loved how the organs of his body worked to provide him with the nourishment needed to make him function, as it caused his legs to shiver, the exact same time I did. For the very last time, I loved him. I loved every cell, every atom that made up every organ in his body.
I can see why you won Idol last season!:) You are a skillfully writer but, even more than that, you write with skill AND heart.
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And then once I got to the end, I felt like I just drove off a cliff. In the good kind of way...because I didn't even know it happened until I crashed.
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