VM: To the Frenchmen and the Indians (Logan; R) 2/?

[afrocurl]

Title: To the Frenchmen and the Indians...2?
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Characters/Pairings: Logan; Logan/Liz (OFC).
Word Count: 6320
Rating: R, but the other chapters might be higher.
Spoilers: Through 309, plus Getting Ready, Getting Set, Go and Picture of You and the first chapter. This fic goes AU after 3x09.
Summary: Logan finds his way to a new

Comments

[shiny4love]

I don’t know how I managed to miss the earlier ficlets and previous chapter but I am glad as it gave me a chance to read it all at once.

I am really enjoying this and its great to see Logan getting on with his life without the influence of V.

I look forward to the next chapters with eager anticipation :)

[afrocurl]

Well, the first chapter was posted in December, it might have been easy to overlook. The teasers didn't get posted to veronicamarsfic because they were given anonymously at vm_santa.

Thanks for reading at this point, though, especially since the concept of Logan without Veronica is not everyone's cup of tea.

Hopefully it won't be too much longer for the next chapter, but I make no real promises.

[starxd_sparrow]

Two words : Yay. You.

*harvests liver as a bribe* See, it's hardly damaged at all! So, write some more!

[afrocurl]

Oh you! I don't even get fun comments right now? I'm hurt.

You want to keep your liver, though, Jess. I know how much you like it. ;)

I'll see what I can do about the next chapter.

[hippiedaisy27]

Great chapter! Lately, all I want to read are Logan without Veronica fics. I can't wait for the next chapter.

[afrocurl]

Thanks for liking the chapter.

Hopefully I can write the next chapter quickly, but who knows.

[bfragrant]

Hey! Great fic. It's nice that you can write Logan independent. Trying to find who he is. Because he has to love and trust himself first right?

“Sarah is pretty much the hottest thing ever,” Logan declared, closing his eyes and sinking back onto his pillow. When Liz snorted, he sat back up, confused.

“What?” he pouted. “It’s true! Have you seen that girl naked?”

Liz raised an eyebrow.

“Oh. Right.” Logan grinned. “Well, you should.”

Okay, so I must be stupid because I didn't get this exchange at all. Is he trying to push Liz's buttons because he knows she likes him? Or does he really dig Sarah? Or judging from his later actions (uhmm hot!) he likes them both?

I get stuck at the details. Bizarre but true.

Thanks for sharing!

[afrocurl]

I'm glad you're liking this concept, because, well, it's not easy for everyone to take. The main point of this whole thing is to see Logan finding himself, yes.

As to the exchange, Logan's just pushing Liz's buttons. You've found one of the parts that sarah_p managed to get into this chapter; she wants Logan all to herself. (Don't we all, by the way.) Hopefully the comment at the end about Logan being high played some of this down, and if not, I'm sorry.

[bfragrant]

Yep it did. I had forgotten about him being high when I was writing my comment.

Who doesn't want Logan indeed. How many chapters is this story going to be approximately?

[afrocurl]

He'd been high the night before, but not when he said the comment. Don't worry--it's a bit fuzzy, even in my mind.

I have no clue how long the fic is actually going to be. It was just supposed to be a one-shot, but it got too long for that. I'm flying by the seat of my pants with this one, thought.

[rejeneration]

Ugh, I HATE it when I spend about thirty minutes writing a comment and LJ eats it!!!! Sorry, honey, this is going to be shorter than my last. I'm pressed for time as it is and now I'm pissed off to boot!

Okay, I'm totally excited to see Logan out on his own. I love that he's far away from Neptune and all the other drudgery and is living and experiencing all on his own!! I know and I'm sorry, but Neptune is just sucking the life right out of the kid and you've created such a new surrounding for him and he's excited and full of life and I LOVE you for it!

Sarah, Liz, Sarah, Liz, Liz, Sarah! I don't know that I can do triangles again, but let me tell ya... Threesomes? Threesomes I can do! -grin- I can't wait to see where you take this, hon! And thanks so much for writing it for me. YOU ROCK!

[afrocurl]

Oh, I HATE when LJ eats a comment. *grumbles* Don't worry about the shorter comment.

I'm glad that you still love Logan experiencing life on his own. I know that there are reminders of the past, but hopefully it sets up the differences nicely.

As for the threesomes--I don't think it will go there, despite what sarah_p might like. I'm guessing, though, that the UST isn't bothering you too much right now.

Tis really no problem to write this, and hopefully I'll have more of this done again soon.