Fic: Songs Your Mother Never Sang You

Jul 05, 2009 22:09

Songs Your Mother Never Sang You. Doctor Who: Ten/Rose, Pg-13.
But the truth of it is: you will never hear your heels click- only the ticking of a clock.
Sometimes you dream in black and white. You never used to, before, but now soft grays color your mother's face, and sometimes she will sing songs that you have never heard before, but you will ( Read more... )

fic: doctor who, fic, ship: doctor/rose, tv: doctor who

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spaciireth July 6 2009, 04:30:00 UTC
That was really beautiful. I love your descriptions.

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boxed July 6 2009, 12:03:29 UTC
Thank you.

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fairyfloss_love July 6 2009, 04:31:10 UTC
Oh my, I love this fairytale theme.

Gorgeous story. I really love this particular line
But then, the sun will rise, and the poppies on the sill of the kitchen window will burn with the light it brings.

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boxed July 6 2009, 12:04:09 UTC
Thank you so much. ♥

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spoons1899 July 6 2009, 05:36:38 UTC
This was beautiful, very fairytale but also very fitting for their relationship and characters. I loved that a) you wrote in second person and it worked which is really not something everyone can do, b) that the shoes were properly silver and c) that you worked in the "How long are you going to stay with me?" moment seamlessly. Lovely and heartbreaking.

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boxed July 6 2009, 12:06:19 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it. ♥ I didn't think making the slippers ruby would do the story enough justice.

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helygen July 6 2009, 06:32:14 UTC
This is beautiful - heartbreakingly melancholy and exquisitely descriptive, and so wonderfully evocative of their times together

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boxed July 6 2009, 12:07:42 UTC
Thank you. ♥ I really appreciate it.

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boxed July 6 2009, 18:07:31 UTC
Oh, thank you so very very much! There will be a lot more of it than usual these days because of then_theres_us and chips_remixed- I'm afraid by the time all's said and done people will be sick of seeing so much writing! Haha, but anyways; thanks again for your lovely comment, I truly appreciate it. ♥

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