Fic: Another Step Toward the Lux Aeterna

Dec 06, 2008 00:45

Another Step Toward the Lux Aeterna. Twilight: Edward/Bella, Pg-13.
Electricity, for twilightprompts.
He watches her dream, and he can recall the days of his life when he was not unusual, electric. When he did not burn with something close to fire.
Bizarre AU-missing-scene-thing.
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fic, ship: edward/bella, book: twilight, fic: twilight

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Magnificent lunarolivian76 December 6 2008, 15:13:45 UTC
That was amazing! Really really fab carina. Your cunning manipulation of the english language is beyond anything I've ever read. That was really good. What a great way to procrastinate studying for my organic chemistry final. *sits in library w/ a 1400 page textbook open in front of her*

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Re: Magnificent boxed December 7 2008, 06:35:24 UTC
Aww, thanks Carolyn! I really appreciate it. I hope UM isn't being too ridiculous. ♥

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awsnappp December 6 2008, 18:26:42 UTC
This was amazing! I like how you went back and forth from Edwards & Bella's thoughts. I like that you had them touch but then Edward had to let go. I loved it! :)

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boxed December 7 2008, 06:35:42 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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of_secret_rooms December 7 2008, 04:38:52 UTC
Gorgeous imagery in this. I love "her hair is a dark bird against the pillow," especially.

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boxed December 7 2008, 06:35:56 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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boxed December 7 2008, 06:37:31 UTC
Oh wow thank you so much! I very much appreciate it. ♥

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woven May 5 2009, 08:16:23 UTC
i love when you write e/b SO MUCH; you capture them so beautifully.

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