Fic : Aaron (Hotch/Reid, PG)

Dec 24, 2010 06:11

Title: Aaron
Author: Bow (bowie28  )
Pairing: Hotch/Reid, Jack
Rating: PG
Warning: A little bit of angst is good for your health.
Word count: 790
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.

Summary: Four months in and he still cannot bring himself to say it. That one simple word.

Author’s notes: Takes place during ‘25 to Life.’ Written for st_ciasta  as a part of my H/R ( Read more... )

hotch/reid, criminal minds, alphabet-meme, slash, fic

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readingyou78 December 24 2010, 00:01:14 UTC
This is a perfect story for so many reasons. First, the guys doing the dishes, there's something soooo intimate to that. Second, Hotch's insecurities and Spencer's assertions. Last but not least, that ending was heartwarmingly beautiful.

To sum up, I love it!

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bowie28 December 24 2010, 05:41:15 UTC
I found myself writing them doing the dishes more and more, lol. I'm glad it translated well. Writing at 2 in the morning can be challenging.

Thank you!

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angstytimelord December 24 2010, 00:01:39 UTC
This was so beautiful. It takes a lot to make me get all teary-eyed over a fic, but this one definitely did it. In a good way! :)

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bowie28 December 24 2010, 05:43:30 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. That means a lot to me. Angst comes easily for me for some reasons. :)

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angstytimelord December 24 2010, 14:55:14 UTC
Me too! (Hence the username!) Angst is always good, though I think there does need to be some fluffy sweetness to balance it, & this had just the right amount of both. :)

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anonymous December 24 2010, 03:39:14 UTC
bow,
this is beyond wonderful <3

nmnazu

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bowie28 December 24 2010, 05:40:16 UTC
Why, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. <3

I really need to stop slacking and write more. :P

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eponineundone December 24 2010, 05:54:50 UTC
Wow, this is so beautiful and genuine and real! And the last line is like the perfect way to tie up the story. Bravo!

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bowie28 December 24 2010, 06:17:22 UTC
Wow, that is the best feedback a writer can get. Those things are my goals whenever I write. Thank you!

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cmali December 24 2010, 13:49:36 UTC
Oh Bow honey... I'm in awe. That was completely beautiful and perfect in every way. Seeing them doing the every day stuff is what makes this so real. I heart you, pumpkin. Big time.

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bowie28 December 27 2010, 20:00:13 UTC
So glad I liked it, love. You know I like when the boys get all domestic. <3

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