Fic : The Man in the Mirror (Hotch/Reid, PG-13)

Dec 02, 2010 13:24

Title: The Man in the Mirror
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Rating: PG-13
Warning: obligatory angst, unforgivable sappiness
Word count: ~2,000
Beta: daylyn  & ayashi_mikage  (You’re the best!)

Summary: It’s Hotch’s forty-fifth birthday party and he’s not feeling very festive.

Author’s Note: Written as kuriadalmatia ’s birthday present. Thank you for your wonderful stories, but ( Read more... )

hotch/reid, criminal minds, slash, fic

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agirlnamedluna December 2 2010, 12:08:20 UTC
Loving this so much :) Hotch is so rarely frail, and Reid reassuring him, is so real.

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bowie28 December 3 2010, 14:16:14 UTC
Thank you. It's been a challenge writing Hotch in this light. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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daylyn December 2 2010, 16:06:38 UTC
Oh Hotch. I love his vulnerability here, and his birthday depression introspection. Sean is awesome as the brother who obviously knows his brother well (despite their age difference and distance). Reid's reassurance and acceptance of Hotch for who he is heartwarming. And Hotch recognizing and allowing himself to be happy despite his fears worries is wonderful. Lovely, lovely fic!

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bowie28 December 3 2010, 14:21:52 UTC
You're too kind. Your thoughts and comments really helped me. I took them to heart, I hope you know that. I'm glad you enjoyed the story even though I wrote it with a lot of doubts (more than most of my H/R stories). Really, thank you!

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ice_ziggee December 2 2010, 21:24:22 UTC
A perfect thing to read in bed before bedtime. I <3 this to pieces. Thank you for posting this....

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bowie28 December 3 2010, 14:25:04 UTC
Thank you for coming by! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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ebonyfeather December 2 2010, 21:27:01 UTC
This was lovely. Hotch's doubts and Spencer's reassurances were just right.

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bowie28 December 3 2010, 14:27:02 UTC
Aww, 'just right' was all I was hoping for. I had some doubts regarding my characterization but it seems people can relate to it, so yay! Thank you for reading. :)

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kuriadalmatia December 2 2010, 23:00:32 UTC
Wow. Thank you. There are so many bits that I love about the story, from "not so good sex" to Hotch miffed that his 'spot' had been taken by Reid, to the delightful appearance of Sean Hotchner. And yes, our dearest Hotch so uncertain, so unsure because he's convinced himself that Reid could do better then Reid quite eloquently pushed those aside.

Thank you for such a lovely gift. Cheers!

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bowie28 December 3 2010, 14:31:26 UTC
Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always see Hotch in this constant battle with himself about who and what he is to people around him, so he needs someone like Reid to kick some Reid-like logical sense back into him. And I'm glad you found that part eloquent. You have no idea how many times I rewrote their dialogue there, lol.

I hope you had a wonderful and fulfilling birthday. <3

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