Strong Heart - 14

[bovidae]

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The next morning found Tobias and Jo standing outside the apartment, studying the exterior of the door with red-rimmed eyes while Chana and the children finished setting out the day's wares.

"There's a mark here," Jo said, running a rough finger over faint scratches in the hardened brick of the door jamb, and then over the unscathed wood next to

Comments

[haikujaguar]

Well this was an unexpected turn of events. I wonder where you're going with this now! :)

[bovidae]

It's actually half the turn; the other half will be next weekend's chapter ;-)

So what you're saying...

[haikujaguar]

... is that the whole story revolves around Jo?

Cheers,
Gudy

Re: So what you're saying...

[bovidae]

You'll just have to read the next chapter to find out, now won't you?

*g*

Re: Interesting twist

[bovidae]

On second glance, I think I had him get a little too forceful there... but not by that much. Another thing to add to the to-be-edited pile *sigh*

But for now, working on the next chapter! ;-D