Strong Heart - 7

[bovidae]

***Jo took the long way back to the tavern, stopping by the merchant villa to leave a message for Master Azrab and Captain Sanidann about her success.

"Just let them know I'll be taking that job I talked to them about after all," she told the servant.

At the tavern, Jo caught up with her squad again.  Dropping on to the bench next to Khusru, she

Comments

Re: I'm a little confused

[bovidae]

This is why I love it when people comment with questions or specific reactions. It's helping me shape the story, hopefully in a way that makes it better for y'all reading it (no plot changes, but some of the details).

This comment, for instance, suggests to me that I really should move a bit of dialogue between Jo & Tobias up from the near future into the very next chapter. I think it'll address this exact issue, so I won't go into it here. If you're still confused about it after next weekend's update, please let me know!

Re: I'm a little confused

[anonymous]

Seconded. I mean, I get the fact that Jo is prickly about these things, but she seems to be more than usually prickly about this pure warrior thing, and it's not quite clear why. Need more background. *nods*

Cheers,
Gudy

[addergoole]

Moar?

[bovidae]

You're a love <3 Chapter 8 goes up next weekend, come back then!

For anyone here who doesn't know already, you can find out exactly when the next chapter goes up by following the twitter account @caprioxbovidae

[anonymous]

Hi Capriox, WA_side here (from PK).
Just thought I'd let you know that I am enjoying reading Strong Heart, and looking forward to next weekend's update.

[bovidae]

Hey, WA-side! Welcome & thanks!

Barring any disasters, the next one will go up on Saturday.