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May 08, 2007 23:55

Title; Witching Hour
Rating; R
Pairing; Ron/Draco
Prompt; 033. Midnight
Prompt set; 50.3
Word Count; 309
Summary; 'The witching hour was their time, the only time they had together and they took it thankfully, meeting in shadowed alcoves, and rooms where they would kiss, talk and fuck each other for an hour, or sometime hours before they had to ( Read more... )

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sexyscholar May 8 2007, 19:47:09 UTC
This part just about killed me.

From "Happily Ever After:"

"I want you forever and ever and then some more forever and then you times it by forever and there you go."

"That’s a long time."

"Not long enough."

Guh. That's so Ron.

Great job on all of these!

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aylaranzz May 8 2007, 19:47:34 UTC
Those are all so beautiful! Well the first one is extremely sad and I was very surprised by the twist at the end. I certainly wasn't expecting it to be Ron who was the DE. Great job.

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ronniekins328 May 8 2007, 21:44:30 UTC
The first one was absolutely gorgeous. I love the flow and I was surprised, yet glad, that it was Ron who went all Death Eater. I love betrayal!Ron (even more than I should).

The second? There are absolutely no words nice enough to give it justice. It was beautiful, sentimental, sweet, sad, and more all wrapped up into a shiny jewel. It's my favorite out of the bunch.

Third-- Ron's words were too sweet. I almost choked on the sheer fluff of it. It's very lovely.

And the fourth: Aaaaaaaw, Ron! *squeeeee* Draco!!

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drwf May 9 2007, 06:10:14 UTC
i loved the truth about draco malfoy ...the last line was the best ...it says everything ......
and the other were great too alot of emotion poured into so little words ..great job..it was great to read soem new stuff

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lokifan May 14 2007, 14:29:06 UTC
These are all brilliant,it's so nice to see some Ron/Draco from you again. The first one was my favourite, what a great twist! I loved the phrase soft, slightly distended skin of his belly.

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checkmatey February 2 2008, 17:02:22 UTC
Agreed.=3

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