"I want to slick it up good," he said, slapping her ass with a meaty paw of a hand. "Now you get this baby stuck up where I can see it
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that is a really nice story. You have an awesome way with words.
I really like the little details that you remember to build in, which make the story itself but also your style of writing a lot more realistic and enjoyable. To mention for example that the bottle was almost empty, or the remark that oil is thicker than water...
Those details seem minor but imho they make for a good read, and exquisitely distinguish your writing from the regular porn-style language that is usually used in a lot of erotica; and your stories belong to some of the hottest things to read ,)
In other words: Thank you for starting to write again! =)
I love this comment :) Thank you for writing it and most of all, thank you for noticing the litte things you noticed and appreciating them - honestly, that means something to me and so I thank you!
*grins* Hey, I'm at work too and I figure if I can't be playing now I might as well be writing about it. It's always nice to be back and I never want to go but damn, my house needs a lot of painting ;)
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Kisses.
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Yummy. As always.
Thanks for the wake up, hun.
Peace.
~D
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I really like the little details that you remember to build in, which make the story itself but also your style of writing a lot more realistic and enjoyable. To mention for example that the bottle was almost empty, or the remark that oil is thicker than water...
Those details seem minor but imho they make for a good read, and exquisitely distinguish your writing from the regular porn-style language that is usually used in a lot of erotica; and your stories belong to some of the hottest things to read ,)
In other words: Thank you for starting to write again! =)
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Don't go away again, please....
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i fell this need to go buy baby oil now.
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