Fic: Persephone - Chapter 7

[botias]

Your eyes do not mistake you!! Another chapter already.

Rating: Vampire slayage, some language, explicit sex
Timeline: Season 2
A/N: Thanks to the incomparable beanbeans for betaing. All remaining errors are mine.

As you all know, this is a very serious fic intended to explore a young girl's woman's awakening sexuality.

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Comments

[devylish]

can i just say how much I love this fic

[botias]

I hate to say it, but I don't expect it to end super soon... But I'm glad you liked your crack!fic fix!! :D I'm glad you liked that bit, it was fun to write. I love snarky cranky unreasonable Buffy.

[devylish]

buffy unreasonable?!!??!! :D Nawwwww, you must be kidding! lol

but i also loved the descriptions you used in that section... it was just well written....

His leather coat billowed behind him when he jumped and ebbed against his legs in neat folds when he landed.

she realized he wasn't making noise anymore when he landed, just the faint whisper and slap of the leather.

looked down at her, eyebrows raised, a fallen angel complete with folded black wings.

[botias]

ooooh, ty for letting me know what you liked. A little coat porn never goes amiss sez I. :D

[petzipellepingo]

The taste and scent of his mouth woke a part of her that had been in limbo since the last time she had kissed him. There was no give to him at all, not even when she wriggled against his constraining hands; she might as well have been a disobedient puppy for all that her weight affected him. She gasped in pleasure when he let her fall against him completely, her breasts pressed flat, her skin so sensitive that even the prod of his belt buckle and the ridge of his fly made her shake.

Her arms encircled his hard shoulders as she fit her body to his, her hand finding its way to his nape. His hands tightened pressing her even closer, fingers digging into her ass and the sensitive small of her back. The perfection of it, his growl of pleasure, resurrected memories of a lost afternoon of breathless pleasure, a blood-stained night of shocking passion. She was starved for him.

He's right Buffy, slaying makes you hot - not crave a non fat yogurt. And he's also right about you needing some monster in your man.

[botias]

Buffy does need some monster in her man. It will be interesting to see how she copes with that notion. Slaying does get her hot sometimes and I can imagine that sometimes it is really difficult and horrifying to kill things, even green, scaly demons.

[zanthinegirl]

Oh, this story is such a guilty pleasure! You really capture so much of what I love about their dynamic here. Very nicely done! Ok, and I seem to have a secret weakness for Buffy trying to kid herself about Spike, not to mention herself... :D

[botias]

Me too, I love it when she totally thinks she has her feelings for him (what feelings?) all labeled and under control.

[ex_angstchi]

Yay! Update!

[botias]

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed :)

[lil_leti]

OH MY.... What a great chapter. I am glad that he was there and has been there. But there is really something going on with both of them. I really do hope she figures things out before they get more out of hand than they already are. I am glad thar he is there for her even when she thinks she doesn't need it.

[botias]

Thank you so much. I love it when Spike saves Buffy maybe even more than when Buffy saves Spike. It must take so much courage to go out and do that by yourself night after night. I mean soldiers at least have a unit. I get that Buffy isn't really a team player, but still. :)