The Griffon and the Raven, Chapter 50

Oct 12, 2015 19:31

Prompt: Unknown
Note: And we're done! It took almost a year to get here, but I enjoyed the ride. I think this is one of my favorite stories I've done in a very long while. Thanks for reading!

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pairing: blackwall/ravena, story: the griffon and the raven, fandom: dragon age

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fire_watch October 30 2015, 16:02:19 UTC
Ugh I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to comment on this!

I always love your prompt-fics! I get too scatterbrained to make a complete story out of them and give up part way through, but yours are always so gripping! And you always find that balance in describing game events but not relying on them so much it's like a walk-through.

I really liked the maturity of their relationship in this one, and the little added level of betrayal you added with him trying to lie and push her away. Blackwall's betrayal runs pretty deep, so I think some real maturity is needed to explain how he can be forgiven without glossing over what he did or making excuses for him.

But RIP beard! Blackwall probably lost 20 years off of his face without it haha

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