Comments | bornofisis: [OOC] Comments, critiques, or suggestions? :D

bornofisis

[OOC] Comments, critiques, or suggestions? :D

Nov 21, 2010 22:38

Hoping on the bandwagon, I guess.

I... basically don't know what on earth I'm doing with Egypt, I'm making him up as I go since there's almost nothing on him in canon. If you have suggestions on how to improve, please share? :) I don't bite.

Polite critiques only please, children.

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!ooc, !critique

Comments 7

salylimon November 22 2010, 03:49:05 UTC

I don't really have much of a critique to make, but I do have a (dumbass) suggestion.

SOMETHING LIKE THIS NEEDS TO HAPPEN. *3*

/shot for being an idiot

I love your Egypt, though. ;3;

bornofisis November 22 2010, 03:50:12 UTC

LOLOL I remember this! ;3; Do we have a Canada yet though?

salylimon November 22 2010, 03:50:59 UTC

...YES. NO. MAYBE SO~

loves_pasta November 22 2010, 07:17:08 UTC

MAMA LOVES YOU AND YOUR ADORABLE STOIC AWKWARDNESSSS.... but she hates your boyfriend :I BUT SHE LOVES YOU~*~*~*~*~*

Mama says don't spend time with any rugged looking Italian men BTW :I

bornofisis November 22 2010, 19:36:58 UTC

<3 I can't tell you how happy that makes me. xD; Hey, like mother like son. :( Gupta can't help it if he likes the buff douchebags!

turkishsurprise November 22 2010, 18:47:57 UTC

I looove Gupta c: He's a sweetheart who tries to always do the right thing, and a naive little bugger that needs things smashed into his skull xD He's the perfect person to help even an ass like Sadiq out.

The only problem I have sometimes... He's so MOE xD I think it's the way you portray him as so naive and innocent, which makes me feel sometimes like Sadiq's REALLY dating a 15-year-old as opposed to a 20-something one. Also the language thing, because I know a lot of Arabians actually speak fluent English since it's taught as a secondary language since primary school (my professor has only just made her first trip to America this year, but she speaks English like anyone else here xD).

I-I hope that doesn't sound mean or anything D: I STILL LOOVE GUPTA, and I love how you characterize him! SADIQ WOULDN'T HAVE ANYONE ELSE.

bornofisis November 22 2010, 19:24:34 UTC

ZOMG I HATE YOU SO MUCH, HOW COULD YOU. ;3;

I'm jk. xD Actually that's super helpful to know, I really suck at the 'bad English' thing and I really want him to talk faster/better. O.o That would explain why my two Egyptian friends spoke better English than most Asians did when they came over, haha. Thanks! :)

AND GUPTA LOVES SADIQ, TOOOOO.