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Penance: Chapter 2b

Feb 04, 2013 01:35

Title: Penance
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R (for this chapter)
Warning: Self-harm
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: Yunho once chose kinship over love, and is now willing to do anything as penance for his act of betrayal.

Note 1: This is still present day, and is the same day of Jaejoong's release.

( He deserved to drown in regret and languish in his guilt )

fic: penance

Comments 38

light_on_oceans February 3 2013, 20:50:17 UTC

spottttt
whoa, Heechul's appearance was totally unexpected. but it makes sense i guess :P was he in any way responsible for what happened to jaejoong or am i just reading too much into that
it's nice to see that Yunho hasn't really forgiven himself either - i noticed a lot of other readers were bitching about complaining that Yunho shouldn't have left Jaejoong to "rot in prison for 8 years" and whatnot. but he probably had a good reason for it...otherwise i'll throttle him :P

in response to your reply to my last comment: you don't think Changmin resembles Yunho? not trying to be rude or anything but in my mind, they're really similar - loyal, responsible, hardworking, etc. of course they're different in some ways too - Yunho's really talkative/Changmin never talks, Yunho's a romantic/Changmin's a realist, etc. i would really love to hear your thoughts on why they are or aren't similar ^^

borborygmus5000 February 4 2013, 02:42:17 UTC

it will definitely make sense why he's there i promise. it's not a matter of why now, but how?

hmmm, i don't know whether his reasons are justifiable really. you'll have to see...

yup they have those same attributes, but over those they seem to be different in everything else? their appearance, their styles, their preferences (what they have divulged so far) and way of articulating themselves. They are both hardworking, but I get the impression that Yunho works to the point of over-exerting himself and sustains injury, while Changmin will work as hard as he can without getting injured. Also, i was watching recent interviews (Missha, Do Dream, etc) and i realised that Yunho is really hyperactive? He's constantly itching to reply to a question, and when he's not, he really fidgets a lot. Like a lot. haha i could go on and on but i think it's those differences which make watching them really enjoyable.

elle1501 February 3 2013, 23:24:08 UTC

It is worse if j was innocent but still got locked up for 8 years. But we all know j has a big heart n will forgive yh or anyone for that matter. I am still bitter with yh even if he self punish himself cos j got raped n that is more traumatic in itself..lets c what nx chapter will bring..update soon ya!

borborygmus5000 February 4 2013, 02:43:53 UTC

haha i will try my best to update soon. poor yunho, everyone is on jae's side...

thanks for reading and commenting!

kattan69 February 3 2013, 23:39:42 UTC

How will Yunho react once he finds out that the warden did more harm to Jae. Oh boy, wonder how is he going to compensate Jae for that horror experience. Maybe he should donate his wealth to Jae first.

borborygmus5000 February 4 2013, 02:45:27 UTC

lol i'm sure he would donate all his wealth any time if jae would give a hoot!

thanks for reading!

junsu_dbsk February 4 2013, 00:21:32 UTC

Wow,,this is very intense. Yunho is being self-destructive. The guilt is really eating up on him badly n I wonder how he will react if he knows that jae was raped in jail.

I can't wait for yun n jae to meet tbh but have a feeling it'll be angstsy. This story itself is so full of angst until now,I'm scared for what to come.

borborygmus5000 February 4 2013, 02:49:27 UTC

yay, the first person who shows some semblance of sympathy for yunho. i guess topics on rape and self-harm are always intense and controversial. i wonder whether this chapter has turned people off ):

YJ will probably have to meet soon, maybe a couple of chapters down since the next chapter will bring us back to the past and how their relationship was slowly established. there will be some sweet romance coming up soon, it's not all angst..

snow_meow February 4 2013, 02:59:20 UTC

What did Yunho do to himself? O_O
Part of his actions stems from guilt but I think for the most part he loves Jaejoong.

From this chapter here, I am guessing that Heechul is the reason why Jaejoong is in prison.

I wonder is Changmin bring Jaejoong to Yunho or Changmin will come to Yunho after he has place Jaejoong somewhere safe.

borborygmus5000 February 4 2013, 03:28:46 UTC

He strangled himself till he fell unconscious ): and omg yay you got it. The self-destructive behaviour really stems a lot from his love for jaejoong and his need to see him. I am really really happy that you picked that up (:

haha those are interesting guesses, I'm really curious about what you all think.

Thanks for reading and commenting!