Comments | borborygmus5000: Penance: Chapter 2a

borborygmus5000

Penance: Chapter 2a

Feb 02, 2013 02:49

Title: Penance
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: G
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: Yunho once chose kinship over love, and is now willing to do anything as penance for his act of betrayal.

Prologue | Chapter 1

( I miss you so much, you have no idea )

fic: penance

Comments 31

4gtnangel February 1 2013, 19:45:34 UTC

Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next one. Looks like a lot of things are slowly gonna be revealed. A lot of secrets and looks like a certain Jung is a bit to blame? But I have to wait.

borborygmus5000 February 2 2013, 02:30:43 UTC

Yeppers, the next one should be coming soon. There may not be that many secrets, it's just stuff that is difficult to reveal in one shot, so bear with me..

Thanks for reading and commenting (:

yunjaeruuuv February 1 2013, 20:32:45 UTC

gosh i'm SUCH a sucker for angst hehe :) thank you for updating!!

borborygmus5000 February 2 2013, 02:32:20 UTC

but there's no angst here, is there? thanks for reading, i can never properly expressed how much i appreciate you guys checking this out. (:

Dying to know....... falcon2339 February 1 2013, 22:12:23 UTC

I wonder what happened. What did YH do? Urrgh......dying of curiosity.... Plus, plus update.

Re: Dying to know....... borborygmus5000 February 2 2013, 02:33:56 UTC

urgh, but what YH did will only be revealed much later i'm afraid! it's gonna take time with chapters alternating between the past and the present. Is this alternating confusing? Do let me know, and thanks for reading!

Re: Dying to know....... falcon2339 February 2 2013, 14:43:25 UTC

No...no...no....your masterpiece is very clear!!!!! Please continue. I really like it. It is just that I am impatient because it is very interesting.....!!!

kattan69 February 2 2013, 00:17:36 UTC

Hungry for more to reveal....

borborygmus5000 February 2 2013, 02:35:29 UTC

i will try my best to reveal as much as soon as i can. btw, is it confusing to alternate chapters between the past and present?

thanks for reading (:

junsu_dbsk February 2 2013, 00:47:56 UTC

I love it when u described the different things done for each season. It was really beautiful. And I can't wait for u to reveal more of what's actually happening. And wow,jaemin seems popular these days...if I didn't misunderstood what u wrote...haha.

Anyways,thanks for this update ^^

borborygmus5000 February 2 2013, 02:38:16 UTC

Well, i like jaemin, but mostly as a plot device to the ultimate otp. hee, hope that was clear.

thanks, i was inspired by pictures of willow trees in different seasons, and how it set the mood for different activities. glad you liked that part, it came to me with a sudden tick.

and thanks for reading (: