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[Kaltia] Coming of Age (NC-17)

Mar 05, 2006 12:14

Title: Coming of Age
Author: kaltia
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Humour?
Pairing: Elricest
Notes: Birthday fic for the lovely maypirate. ♥
Word Count: 6,226

( Havoc chucked a cigarette butt out of the window and, when he was sure he had Al's attention in the rear-view mirror, mouthed 'good luck'. )

elricest, nc-17, fic, fma, nymeria

Comments 34

mikkeneko March 5 2006, 12:22:25 UTC

Wow. This is even better than the voyeur Alphonse mental -- the imag of poor Ed, listening to Al moaning downstairs and squirming in his bed, too guilty to even touch his own erection... poor, poor misguided boy. XD

gulltopp March 5 2006, 14:14:13 UTC

....well, that was hot.

*bows down to you*

hitomi_san March 5 2006, 14:26:07 UTC

Oh my god, this fanfic was amazing |D I was so close to laughing my ass off when Ed was trying to get rid of all the women... XD

At some part I was afraid you'd seriously write some threesome, but anyway, I'm glad you didn't. *lol* That was really good though I'd love to read the whole pr0n part though. XD

maypirate March 5 2006, 14:37:25 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

*points at story*

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!

I love you. I don't know whether to make starry eyes or happy-weepy eyes or no eyes because they blew off my head with awesome. It's like you incorporated every weakness I have for stories and then put them together and then my head exploded and it was so awesome.

And I love you again!

LOVE.

mikkeneko March 5 2006, 23:24:27 UTC

MAY IS NOT AROUND WRYYYY ;_;

squirrelarmy March 5 2006, 14:58:40 UTC

[loves with all the love ever] This was ADORABLE. They're both so oblivious and completely full of issues. ^__^ Ha, it was HOT, and I loved how Al's homosexuality was just casually thrown in, and all the STORIES. Ed's defense mechanisms are just fantastic.

^__^ Hee, I'm so glad you got this up!