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Steppin' Out Part 2

Apr 23, 2006 13:58

And it's finished! Yay!

Part 1

( Steppin' Out )

character: blue beetle - ted kord, character: mary marvel, character: l-ron, fanfic, character: ralph and sue dibny, character: fire, rating: pg-13, character: booster gold, creator: silver_apples

Comments 47

anonymous April 23 2006, 18:37:34 UTC

Pffft hahahahahahahahaha~!~

Oy, I needed that. *wipes eyes* That was awesome.

silver_apples April 23 2006, 19:32:45 UTC

Thank you!

eliyes April 23 2006, 20:26:35 UTC

You're welcome! (that was me, forgetting to sign in)

I think I liked part 2 even better than part 1, but your characterisation was marvelously consistant. Oh boys. You do tell tales.

*manfully resists adorable owl*

silver_apples April 23 2006, 22:23:37 UTC

No one can resist the owl!

I like part 2 better too. As does Booster. Part 1 was very hard on him.

Thread 5

clayin April 23 2006, 18:40:41 UTC

Mmm.

Muh?

Thoughts? There are thoughts?

...mmm, Ted in tux...

silver_apples April 23 2006, 19:33:40 UTC

...mmm, Ted in tux...

By a remarkable coincidence, that was the thought that led to this fic.

clayin April 23 2006, 19:35:02 UTC

Followed quickly by "Mmm, Booster stripping Ted out of tux...."? :D

silver_apples April 23 2006, 19:42:56 UTC

That is the logical conclusion. It's amazing those two find the time to save the world.

Thread 14

doctorv April 23 2006, 19:14:05 UTC

...GUH! *melt*
Lovely. Just...yeah. So them, and so hot. (Smart Ted, committing to a course of action by wearing that tux. Gloves. Cane! Subtle just isn't in his vocabulary, is it?)

And it says more about my obsession with editing than your skills as a writer that I did notice one thing:
He was up again right away, grapping Booster's leg and tugging him down.

I assume that's supposed to be either gripping or grappling? (It looks a lot like one of those instances where two words would work somewhere and so the brain merges them. *laugh* Fun times. ;D)

silver_apples April 23 2006, 19:32:06 UTC

Spell check has failed me. Fixed now.

Ted can be subtle. But he's dealing with Booster and wants to skip the awkward relationship talk and go straight to the sex, so subtle wasn't appropriate.

doctorv April 23 2006, 23:06:42 UTC

Fwee! Excuse to read it again! *readreadre--* There it is! *readreadread!* XD

Yeah, Booster probably wouldn't have appreciated subtle anyway. And it's nice to see Ted has his priorities in order.

dorksidefiker April 23 2006, 20:49:43 UTC

*dead from laughing and cheering Booster and Beetle on*

silver_apples April 23 2006, 22:17:33 UTC

As if those two weren't bad enough without having a cheering section :)

vzg April 24 2006, 00:50:53 UTC

Pffft, Ted. He should know better than to go into an enclosed space with a horny Booster and expect there to not be sexlation.

silver_apples April 24 2006, 03:19:53 UTC

Ted knows. Ted even initiates it. He just feels that imminent burning or interruption by innocent girls should put a damper on the sexlation. Booster believes that those things add urgency. It's something they'll need to discuss. Later.

clayin April 24 2006, 03:39:11 UTC

It's something they'll need to discuss. Later.

After the sexlation!

silver_apples April 24 2006, 23:43:25 UTC

Naturally. It's the best time to discuss things; gives the boys a chance to rest and catch their breaths for round 2 ;)