Comments | booshslashhaven: Halloween special of DOOM, part four

shoulderpads88 in booshslashhaven

Halloween special of DOOM, part four

Oct 15, 2017 20:49

I cannot believe this is happening! This is a very new challenge to me and I am honoured to be a part of this BSH/Boosh fandom tradition! Squeeeeee! Beta'd only by a very sleepy, but well read, partner...so I hope I don't offend your eye balls. Also, written by an American-english speaker whose native tongue is not english--I apologize in advance ( Read more... )

fandom: mighty boosh, fan fiction

Comments 8

gothikfaerie October 16 2017, 02:10:01 UTC

W00 cheers for a token Saboo appearance (because who doesn't love Richard Ayoade in guyliner & dressed like Jimi Hendrix)! But also, great hiding place for the book. Will it be enough to stop Terry tho?!

shoulderpads88 October 16 2017, 02:43:01 UTC

Aww! Thanks for the comment!!!! It will be very tricky to get that sticky gum off the book for sure!! And how can I NOT give Saboo, and the council, an appearance? I hope he comes out with his snide comments later as well<3333333

morganya October 16 2017, 03:35:09 UTC

Of course Vince has too much respect for Charlie to go against the rules of the written word *heart*

ETA shoulderpads88 October 16 2017, 10:19:44 UTC

<333333 Thank you!!!!! I thought about that scene a lot<333333

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ETA:
Also, in my haste I made a mistake about Eric Phillips--HE DIDN'T CHOP UP CHARLIE....but I will amend that when I can. Sorry guys<33333

A missing scene from part 4 shoulderpads88 October 17 2017, 18:15:27 UTC

I had this very very very short scene in mind when I wrote part four. However I did not write it due to time constraints. I wrote it in a way that won't really affect the rest of the fic, so here it is ( ... )

Re: A missing scene from part 4 garrideb October 20 2017, 23:34:21 UTC

Huddling for warmth is one of my all-time favorite tropes, so it's a treat to get a scene of Howard cuddling Vince to warm him up!

garrideb October 20 2017, 23:32:22 UTC

Aw, I'm so happy you included a dumbwaiter, and that it helped save the day! And I definitely laughed when Howard's reaction to seeing a frozen solid Charlie was to think of the energy bill. I also liked how the notion of fixing Charlie through writing a new story was addressed and dismissed in a truly Vince-like manner. And what a cool twist that the magic book was inside Charlie! It's just so perfectly... booshy.

But I think my favorite part was where Howard finally got the courage to apologize properly, and that he and Vince are back to working together, hopefully in time to save the Shaman council!

shoulderpads88 October 21 2017, 22:08:32 UTC

You can't see me, but I am crying right now. Thank you so much for such a detailed comment! I got that written fast, but I was thinking really hard about how to include aspects of previous chapters in mine. And the name Terry actually gave me the idea about how to explain out of just writing Charlie back in, because that episode in LuxCom was basically about script coming to life. I am so honored that you even took time to read my little missing scene! I can die happy now<3333333